Flawless

FLAWLESS

Even broken things are beautiful to look at,

There is beauty in a face that doesn't smile.

Not everything is meant to be perfect,

Sometimes imperfections are perfectly designed. 

Look beyond, look above,

There lives a soul without life,

Tell her, make her believe that she is alive.

Despite all the negativity

And all the fruitless efforts,

She smiles; yet believes that she is no good.

After all that has happened,

Her hope died, but her desire to live remains.

Make her believe, even broken souls are beautiful too.

Her life all messed up, her destiny all tied,

She feels that she has no beauty, 

Because life took away her smile.

Make her believe that a face which doesn't smile is happy too.

She claims she is imperfect, 

She has never done anything right in her life,

Talk to her, make her believe, 

That she is flawless even in her imperfect life. 

Reviews

[MaximumFlight]

"She claims she is imperfect,
She has never done anything right in her life..."

You're words are very powerful and I can reflect on those words hit hard. This piece is wonderful. :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You made my day, thank you very much for taking the time to read my work :)

[Ty]

"Talk to her, make her believe,
That she is flawless even in her imperfect life." ...so powerful.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for reading. I am glad that you found it to be powerful :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

From the start I knew I'm gonna be reading something which will touch my heart...and your work never fails..

[Najam Us Saher]

I feel extremely honoured and happy to hear that. 😀

[not your muse]

It felt like you were talking about me. I am like that way too.

[Najam Us Saher]

Oh! Okay. I am happy that I wrote something you could relate with, thank you so much.

[Silmara McGarry]

I can understand what is happening to her, whom wants to have the destiny all tied against its will? That alone can make one hopeless and therefore do think that one is not good enough. She must look for the strength inside her, and understand that she is God´s creation together with all the other beautiful wondrous he has created.
Thinking about the messed up life and flaws...etc...it is concentrating on the negative, and that has a different vibration.

Definitely a very good poem. I am very glad I read it! :-)

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. I am speechless to read your words. You are right one really feels this way after destiny leaves in heart wrenching situation. Thank you very much for taking the time to read this, I am overwhelmed, thank you :)

[Silmara McGarry]

You are most welcome!!! :-)))

[Vidit V Kumar]

Fabulous...No words to express more than this. Love it:)

[Najam Us Saher]

I am overwhelmed to know that, thank you very much 😀

[Mikku]

A sad face nicely pictured.. Loved it

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much, much appreciated.

[costa siwale]

interesting point of view.
A quiet enjoyed the sad yet thoughtful lines of expression.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for taking the time to read this, it means a lot :)

[costa siwale]

Of course, no problem

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

People can be so unkind and inhumane to one another. Unfortunately, there are those who are born and know nothing but a lifetime of suffering. Perhaps the only beauty they have ever known is a refreshing, cool breeze on a summer's day or the sight of the moon shining behind a wisp of clouds. Nature is the beauty of creation and a reflection of the beauty that can be in this world and a mirror of the beauty to be in the next. Each person suffers in his own way, some a lot more than others. It is from this suffering that we learn humility and compassion. Steel is strengthened by fire, so are we.

[Najam Us Saher]

You are absolutely right, when people lose the touch of kindness from others what makes them happy is nature not the company of people. Also, we learn a lot from suffering as it definitely makes us a better person. Thank you very much for such insightful review and wise words, your words have depth and honesty in them which it seems to me came from a deeper understanding about life and after hard times.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I rather not agree with you over poem. Why you are not happy? And tell me who doesn't have flaws?? Everyone has it.

[Najam Us Saher]

I am fine, really, sometimes I overthink and make myself such. Thank you very much for your words and concern, I can never forget an act of kindness :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Remove that sometimes and keep always a smile. Yes all time :) Most welcome.