Don't let my words fade

Don't let my words fade

A Poem by Najam Us Saher
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Let my words remain in your heart forever

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DON'T LET MY WORDS FADE
I will not live long,
I want my words to remain forever. 
I will leave my unsung songs,
Promise me, you will leave them never.
When I am no more, don't cry,
It would be deceiving me when I was alive.
So here I lay, under this tombstone with my head up high,
When people like my words and want to see me, tell them that I am no more;
Show them where I lie.
My words will not haunt you,
They will be gone along with me.
I will leave my words with you,
Don't expect them to be words of glee.
I wish that my words gain attention,
As I was not a person to be.
I lived all my life in seclusion,
Don't believe? Come and see. 
This is how I bid you goodbye.
After I live; before I die. 



© 2017 Najam Us Saher



Author's Note

Najam Us Saher
I always wanted to write something that people read and recall that after I am gone.
Don't worry about me, it's not like I am unhappy now, I am fine. These are just words.

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This is so sweet and pure, keep writing! 🔥

Posted 2 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

Sure, thank you so much, keep reading.
It's human nature to want some part of us to last forever. I think people have children for this reason. And as a writer, you've expressed the desire to have your words last longer than your fallible body. I don't see this as any kind of sad write, so I am not seeing the need for your author's note. I think dying is perfectly natural & so is the desire to be eternal. I believe that our words are not the way we live forever, but it's in the way our words make a lasting impact on someone. Your message imparts a universally understood wish & the event of our death as a celebration (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

You are absolutely right. I thank you very much for such insightful review. We writers wish that tho.. read more
It is a great poem. It has great structure. It is a very deep, surreal, and emotional. And if you ever need someone to talk with. I am here.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

How kind of you, I appreciate kindness above all. Thank you very much, I mean it.
THe second stanza made of beautiful rhyming words and it clearly show what you are to describe upto.
Well written

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much for such appreciation.
Priyanshi

5 Months Ago

My pleasure.
First, it's good to know you're doing okay. Second, this is a wonderful piece. Thank you for sharing your words :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

I am glad that you liked it, thank you so much :)
Maybe we want ourselves to be acknkowledged . We want people to know our words . To talk about it .
Great write Najam

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

Yeah, we want that we leave a good impression and our words behind, thank you very much for reading .. read more
I think that your poem is very easily related to. I think that you did a wonderful job with this.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much, it means a lot :)
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SKY
You are real master words. The way you poured the emotions in it, is really amazing.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much. I am extremely happy to know that you liked this.
SKY

5 Months Ago

I really like the prose and even your authors note. Your most welcome :)
Your last line is so mighty to end with! I really love this work of art

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

I thank you so much for such kind words. I appreciate it.
I sang it in my head, cuz I found a beautiful Melody in it and combined with the beautiful and true words, it's a masterpiece! I loved it. It is gonna be in my favorite list for sure.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

How sweet of you. Thank you so much dear. May god bless you :)
Anjali

5 Months Ago

You're very welcome!!

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Some people want to live long so that they are remembered for a long time, I want to live a little and want to be remembered forever. All the noises in my head, all the words unsaid, all the emotio.. more..

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