Don't let my words fade

Don't let my words fade

A Poem by Najam Us Saher
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Let my words remain in your heart forever

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DON'T LET MY WORDS FADE
I will not live long,
I want my words to remain forever. 
I will leave my unsung songs,
Promise me, you will leave them never.
When I am no more, don't cry,
It would be deceiving me when I was alive.
So here I lay, under this tombstone with my head up high,
When people like my words and want to see me, tell them that I am no more;
Show them where I lie.
My words will not haunt you,
They will be gone along with me.
I will leave my words with you,
Don't expect them to be words of glee.
I wish that my words gain attention,
As I was not a person to be.
I lived all my life in seclusion,
Don't believe? Come and see. 
This is how I bid you goodbye.
After I live; before I die. 

© 2017 Najam Us Saher


Author's Note

Najam Us Saher
I always wanted to write something that people read and recall that after I am gone.
Don't worry about me, it's not like I am unhappy now, I am fine. These are just words.

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I think that your poem is very easily related to. I think that you did a wonderful job with this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much, it means a lot :)
You are real master words. The way you poured the emotions in it, is really amazing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I am extremely happy to know that you liked this.
Writer at last! Sky ~

6 Years Ago

I really like the prose and even your authors note. Your most welcome :)
Your last line is so mighty to end with! I really love this work of art

Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

I thank you so much for such kind words. I appreciate it.
I sang it in my head, cuz I found a beautiful Melody in it and combined with the beautiful and true words, it's a masterpiece! I loved it. It is gonna be in my favorite list for sure.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

How sweet of you. Thank you so much dear. May god bless you :)
Anjali

6 Years Ago

You're very welcome!!
Ah, don't we all need that?... It's like there's this selfish part of us writer beings wanting to be preserved in someone's memories... or maybe that's how everyone is designed to be ...
We fade but our words trail, leaving a mark ...or so we hope..
Lovely write, nicely penned. (:

Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

Correct, we want our words to be preserved not only in books but also in one's heart. Thank you so m.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Years Ago

You're welcome. A pleasure always (:
One of the greatest things we can aspire to be is a memory, not of our self, but a day to day belief. Who cares if our name is attached?

Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You are absolutely right, one knows that they cannot live forever so they be good towards others so .. read more
this is a touching write,sad but beautiful sentiments at the same time

Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

I am happy that you found this to be beautiful, thank you very much for reading this and my every po.. read more
This is just heartbreaking but beautiful at the same time. Well done, again, Najam :) You just keep surprising me with amazing poems. "Let my words remain in your heart forever" Oh, they will my friend.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

I am overwhelmed to know that you liked this. Thank you very much. 😀
Poem was good and emotionally filled with heartaches,


Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
I also share your sentiment. Let my words live on after I'm gone. Let me make a positive difference in this world and be remembered for it. Nice one :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

We have similar emotions, I can say for sure. Thank you very much for sharing your feelings.
Avia

6 Years Ago

Yes, I agree, we see a lot of things the same way. You're welcome, I'm glad you appreciate my feelin.. read more

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Najam Us Saher

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