Undisturbed

Undisturbed

A Poem by Najam Us Saher

UNDISTURBED
Curled up, brittle, faded fallen leaves
Lying peacefully unnoticed on the floor.
The sun rays hit the dusty tree
Rooted upright on a barren land.
Dried soil, thirsty earth
Waiting for the shower of rain.
The first drop meets the ground
Essence of petrichor diffused
Water splashes on the tree
Erasing the dust.
Leaves, drenched in water
Feel refreshed.
Stationary scene back in movement
With the downpour of rain.
Life back in action after a long pause
Like the change in nature
Everything at place after a chase,
Patience is what it takes. 

© 2017 Najam Us Saher



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I agree my friend.
"Like the change in nature
Everything at place after a chase,
Patience is what it takes"
We need patience. Nothing come easy in a life. Thank you Najam for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

6 Months Ago

I thank you very much for reading.
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

You are welcome Najam.
This could not be more true. Nature indeed takes its own time, its own pace. What will be fertile, will be. Patience is what it takes. To add, it also takes a sense of awe and wonder at these grand, slow forces of nature. Beautifully and awesomely written, friend.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

10 Months Ago

I am extremely happy that you understood what exactly I wanted to convey. Thank you so much :)
I love your poetry because it is so mystifying and has beautiful imagery. It’s always great to learn a word or two as well!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

11 Months Ago

Wow. You made my day. 😀
You have my greatest gratitude :)
Wow...actually a brilliant example to describe the word patience....sometimes patience brings what we are waiting for
Good write, dear.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

11 Months Ago

You are right sometimes patience is what it takes, thank you very much for such kind words.
Priyanshi

11 Months Ago

My pleasure,Friend.
Enjoyed the poem, Rain, metaphor for life. Yes, we stagnate at times, but a nice storm comes along and gets us moving again. Great words and composition. Cheers!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much for stopping by, it means a lot :)
patience is what it takes,that`s for sure

Posted 11 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

11 Months Ago

Yes, thank you very much for reading.
I love how descriptive this is and how it has a deeper meaning. Very nicely written.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much for never failing to keep up reading with my work. It really means a lot :)
Avia

11 Months Ago

You're welcome. It's always a pleasure ☺
I like how this creates lovely images in my mind. Petrichor, the only thing I love about rain ;)
I enjoyed reading your piece. Well penned. (:

Posted 11 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

11 Months Ago

I am crazy about petrichor. Thank you very much for reading. Good to see you :)
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

;P haha well I might not be crazy about it but yeah it's nice ;) :p
You're welcome, Najam. A.. read more
Wow.... Beautiful! It's just so amazing!!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

11 Months Ago

Thank you very much for reading. It means a lot :)
Anjali

11 Months Ago

You are welcome!
Beautifully penned, Najam. Have you watched that Movie "The Fountain"?

Posted 11 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

11 Months Ago

No, I haven't. Thank you so much for reading, I am happy to know that you liked this.
Siddharth Roy

11 Months Ago

You should watch it. It's about Nature and Spirituality. =)

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