Fallen

I guess this is more of a song than a poem. As stereotypical as it sounds, it's all about a girl that's, well, fallen.

[Instrumental beginning]

Verse 1:

Well, it's impossible.

A fucked up tale, I've heard all about it!

They say it's not over, it's not over.

But she's gone, gone.

Bridge: 

And her fingers slipped through mine.

It was almost sublime.

Chorus:

And I've fallen, fallen.

Tears staining the ground I'm

Falling, falling.

Yeah, I've fallen, fallen.

She's bleedin' and I'm

Falling, falling.

Verse 2:

It started off so easy.

Some playful smiles and my breath goin' weezy.

How could I have known?

 I saw her tug at her sleeve,

And she looked at me

With eyes that were 

Chorus:

Fallen, fallen.

Oh, she's fallen, fallen.

And where was I for her?

Oh, I will see you in another life.

Oh, I will see you in another life.

[Just vocals] Girl, I will find you in another life.

Author's Note

I wrote this last year, I think? I'd be open to basically any thoughts about this. I definitely want to change the first verse because SOMETHING about the first two lines bothers me a lot but I'm not sure now to fix it. So, do note that this song is UNFINISHED as of right now.

Also, I have an idea for how the chorus would play out musically, and it would be very Marianas Trench-esque with the vocal harmonies and such, but I still need to write out all the notes on paper and figure out how to transfer that onto my computer. If any of you know a site (preferably free) to write sheet music on, I'd be grateful for the info!