I Do, I Don’t?

I Do, I Don’t?

A Poem by Nancy T. Words Move Me
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An exchange at the alter.

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I do
She said to him
This, was heard by many
His response to her was, I don’t
Pardon?

© 2017 Nancy T. Words Move Me



Author's Note

Nancy T. Words Move Me
My first attempt at a Cinquain style poem

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This is an amusing Cinquain style poem. I wonder how he answered her 'Pardon?'

Posted 2 Months Ago


Not familiar with this poetic style & I find it helpful to get a few basic parameters in the author's notes, if you don't mind (we can all teach each other this way) . . . but I will look it up. I like the way you present the unthinkable in such a matter of fact way -- good imagination! Also, that last inquiry is a succinct reply (so unlike what we would expect -- being unexpected is a good thing in writing!)

Posted 2 Months Ago


Nancy T. Words Move Me

2 Months Ago

Hello, and thank you for your kind comment. You are right, I guess I wrongfully assumed everyone on.. read more

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Nancy T. Words Move Me
Nancy T. Words Move Me

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I love life! I am never bored; I have too many hobbies and interests to go there. I fully understand that each of us has our own path and we must keep moving on. I hope my writing inspires you. more..

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