Breaking Point

Woot, new record, 5minutes I wrote this.

I can't take it anymore

This sickness is driving me into madness

Out of my mind

I'm going insane

I can't do this

 

RUN!!!

HIDE!!!

I can't control it

I'm breaking

And falling

Like my swollen pride

 

I just can't do this

Nothing seems right

My life isn't whole

Filled with empty spaces

Where my love used to be

 

RUN!!!

HIDE!!!

I can't control it

I'm breaking

And falling

Like my swollen pride

 

Now the ashes come down like snow

You set fire to my life

With no hopes of revenge

The dark sentinal has come

And I have fallen

 

I'm breaking

And falling

Like his swollen pride

Reviews

[Zane Mathias]

pride can be your best friend or your worse enemy..

[James Takeo Panton]

quick, rhythmic, nice structure.....simple ending.....and under 5 minutes.....you should be proud!

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

Its like a song...A very well written piece and in 5mins as well. Brilliant!