Amethyst

i was prompted to write about my favorite color...

Ruptured vessels pooling beneath my skin…
Leaving ruby red puddles, just there, slowly forming.

The cold sucking mercilessly at the warmth that was formerly there.
Hazel, blank eyes at the sapphire sky, set in an eternal stare.

Death dancing his fingers gently across my neck.
Savagely, internally stealing my hasty breath.

Summer colors upon this golden skin, they shall miss...
As death and winter kiss this dormant flesh to an engrossing hue of amethyst.

Reviews

[Sseoni]

Wow! Amazing poem! Great use and variety of words! I loved it! It was beautifully written, wonderfully detailed, and greatly descriptive! I found your poem to be very passionate! I really enjoyed reading it! Fantastic writing! :D

[Dionysus Cain]

yeah i agree, this was a nice read. i liked it more than i thought i did after reading it once. i got a full view of all the senses in this poem. i like that about this poem, i can't say anything else but great ink... damn good!

[Lyrical Love]

Summer colors upon this golden skin, they shall miss...
As death and winter kiss this dormant flesh to an engrossing hue of amethyst.

Amazing! And all of this inspired by a color that pleases your senses...
Perfectly penned!