Timely ice creams

~time stops for a while~

 Frozen like vanilla ice creams,

 with 

 oozing syrups--

 The time,

 it never really runs now,

 it slows,

 it walks, 

 it strides purposefully. 

 Like refrigerator airs

 On a summer day,

 It blows all at once.

 Like a cone of fluffy sweetness

 It drips ever so slowly.

 Like yellow sunshine

 Licked off fingers,

 Pink naughtiness

 Sprinkled with nuts,

 It oozes around me in

 Sweet, sticky, sour syrups 

 of love.

Author's Note

Just a fun poem. Review and tell me what you think of it.

Reviews

[realmwriter]

What a soft and delicate lament. Time. It has a way of moving so swiftly that we miss it as it just grazes by us, but it can move so very slowly that we feel as if we are susspended by it, unable and perhaps unwilling to relinquish ourselves from it. So beautiful and soulful. I love the metaphors you use, comparing time to Frozen Vanilla Ice Cream.

[Moonie]

Wow! Thank you for the brilliant words!

[realmwriter]

You're most welcome my friend

[Woody]

time frozen like vanilla ice cream. strange comparison but original and funny.
the whole poem is pleasant on the tongue just like ice cream licked off the cone.
well penned Moon's daughter.

[Moonie]

Haha, quirky is my middle name, sir!!! Time has been compared to so many things...I wanted to be the first one to compare it to an ice cream.

[Woody]

it is certainly the first time I've come across such a comparison. I like that Moon's quirky daughter :)

[elvenom]

This piece leaves me with tingling desire to consume ice-cream. Well done, really nice!

[Moonie]

Oh, which flavor would you like, dearie? Thanks for the lovely review!

[elvenom]

I like all flavors, but mostly vanilla and chocolate. Especially chocolate.

[Bluefire]

Yummm. Ice cream. *.*
This is sweet as an ice cream cone and meaningful too.
Well played. ^^

[Moonie]

Hahaha! Thanks, your review surpasses the sweetness of ice creams!

[Bluefire]

Awe, you're welcome! ^^

[Jack Wolfe]

A sweet and alluring piece you have here, and who doesn't like ice cream? I'd watch your over use of 'It' when starting stanzas, but other than that, a tempting write. Well done.

[Moonie]

Thanks, dear Jack.

[MsJewel]

ice cream and love, the perfect pairing, so tempting, so sweet. Lovely!

:) Julie

[Moonie]

Indeed! Ice cream and love belong together! :))

[Alfred Kukitz]

Can I have a cone. Talk about a real sweet lovable poem. I feel like a kid again. Thank you, thank you so much Moon's fairest daughter.

[Moonie]

Oh, that has to be the sweetest review! Thanks a lot!!!

[Frieda P]

Love your i scream metaphor, it held me captive and satisfied my sweet craving! Sprinkled with nuts, indeed. :)

[Moonie]

Sorry for replying so late! :(
And thanks for loving my ice cream (I scream;)) metaphor!

[C. Rose]

A relaxing, yummy poem. Thanks for sharing.

[Moonie]

Thanks for the awesome review! :))

[Moonie]

Thanks for the awesome review! :))

[Coyote Poetry]

Ice cream and love. Both tasty and sweet. I agree. I enjoyed the positive feel and hope in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Moonie]

I am glad you liked this one!:)

[Cory Barrett]

with no shame do i exclaim my love for the food metaphor. This one does not only that, but also brings us to the sweet monotony of summer.

[Moonie]

Amen to the food metaphors!