Gingerbread

~gingerbread~

Reviews

[Confuser]

Moon's fairest daughter: Worldly 'junk' can lure the most righteous person away. It is such a beautiful writing. It's packed full of frustration and sadness at the way we allow ourselves to fall into that pit of empty desire. The metaphor of gingerbread men is brilliant, and unfortunately greed leads the way for too many. 'But not for free love' is so profound, but it does exist, I believe. For everything to be transparent: honesty and kindness to be in the forefront of our mind would change the world. Every line is a plea for hope. Your ending is beautiful. Great writing & Congratulations. Well deserved. Thank you so very much! Dale

[Moonie]

Hello, Dale! It's very nice to meet you.... I look forward to reading your work too. :))
Thank you for the lovely review! I feel truly humbled.... :))

[Confuser]

Hello to you Moon's fairest daughter: You are so kind! I am a novice; you're so so talented!!! You're welcome, but THANK YOU for the beautiful poem. Bravo!

[Moonie]

Thank you, Dale!! I have no words left to express my gratitude. :))
it feels so good to be appreciated by as great a poet as you..
Love and hugs (the autocorrect changed it to bugs initially, thank god I changed it back!!!)

[Confuser]

That's for sure...Mosquito's have taken over here!!! Thanks/you'll see grammar errors in my poetry; sorry; need to find time to correct & will - thank you sweet lady!

[Daydreamer]

CONGRATULLAAATTIIOONNSSS🎆🎆🎆🎆🎆 on being the poet of the yeaarr💕💕💕
So proud of youuu,ferocious 😉❤❤❤

[Moonie]

Heya, Manal!!!!!!!!! Where have you been, my sagacious buddy??!! I have missed you so much!!!!! :))
Thanks a lot, miss excellent poetess!!!!!!!! :))

[Daydreamer]

Baby, I miss you so much more, inbox me sometime if you can ❤
and congrats again! Glad such talent is being recognized AS THE BEST😍

[Moonie]

I did inbox you.. check it out... and honestly I don't think I deserve it.... :))

[Country Girl46]

Material things mean nothing to me. I would rather have nothing and be happy then own the world and be miserable. I liked your poem. Ty for sharing!

[Moonie]

I agree, material thigs have little value when we put happiness on the opposite scales. Thank you for reviewing and for the lovely comment. :))

[Country Girl46]

Congrats! I am so glad you won Poet of the Year! You definitely had my vote.

[Moonie]

Oh wow, I just checked my mail. I didn't know that I had won the award. Thanks so much dear for informing me and for the vote. I feel truly humbled by your kind words. :))

[Country Girl46]

You're welcome!

[Mélania Woolf]

This is strong and meaningful! Enjoyed every word of it, thank you for posting!

[Moonie]

I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for the lovely review. :))

[Elisa]

Wow, you're very talented, like publicatoin-worthy talented. I loved the imagery that you used to convey an isssue that's becoming more and more prevalent in society today. Wonderful, wonderful job!

[Moonie]

Wow, that's quite a compliment, dear!! Thank you so much for reviewing. :))

[harshita]

the last five lines are my favourite.... beautifully written :)

[Moonie]

Oh my, thanks a lot. :))

[harshita]

you are welcome :) i'd be really grateful if you review my poems too :)

[Eleanor]

You spoke the truth in just few lines, which is a great thing!
I really liked your use of metaphors.
Beautiful work! :)

[Moonie]

Thanks a lot. I am glad you liked this one!! :D

[The Twin Arenas]

I'd only read that other poem of yours, the one about maple sap. I liked that one. I like this one, too.

Your writing is kind of enchanted, like one of those enchanted forest tourist places. I love those places.

[Moonie]

I am glad you liked this one and the maple sap one. :)) thanks!

[Author Rucha Joshi]

Wow! I really love how you make use of words to build the imagery!
Awessssooome!!

[Moonie]

I am overjoyed to hear that!! :))

[Woody]

delightful! really beautiful. I'm unable to pick any favourite lines here.
these are the words of a sensitive poet. amazing!

[Moonie]

You know you've done well, when an excellent writer( that's you!!) can't pick his favourite lines. Thanks for finding time to read my scribbles! :))

[Woody]

awww I'm flattered. thank you Dear :))))