Whiskey

Whiskey

A Poem by Moon's fairest daughter
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~just a scribble~

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Bronzed skin,
chartreuse eyes.
He kissed like a drop of
sweet sunshine.
Whiskey-sweet taste,
in a champagne glass
of platinum wine.

© 2018 Moon's fairest daughter



Author's Note

Moon's fairest daughter
Whiskey is sunlight held together by water...

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brilliant "scribble"...well described and short
such short work can falter or flourish...here you flourished.....whiskey and a boys lips....I wonder though..was whiskey even involved ultimately in the end of this piece?.....its these great questions that define this piece....great work moon

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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ooooo love that champagne glass of platinum wine!!! with whiskey in it to boot :)))))))) my taste buds are hooting and howling and quivering my dear ;) he sounds like an Adonis ... but we may be getting a little tipsy and not such a good judgement of look ahahahahahaha! i really like this Moon ..well done..pleasant places it brings me..and savory tastes and sensuous kisses .. ahhhhhhhhhhh love ... and spring is here !!!!!!!!!!!! we have our first flowers showing green.
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


This happens often. I begin reading your poetry, and I sense the depths of it, and deeper stories all around it, and wish for it to come to life on a page and reveal everything hidden and exposed. Perhaps, if you would be so kind, one day you will weave your words in a book so one can read them again and again. The colors, the feel, the sigh of this moment all speak. “I know some who are constantly drunk on books as other men are drunk on whiskey” ― H.L. Mencken. Pour me another poem, please. :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


brilliant "scribble"...well described and short
such short work can falter or flourish...here you flourished.....whiskey and a boys lips....I wonder though..was whiskey even involved ultimately in the end of this piece?.....its these great questions that define this piece....great work moon

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your deliberate use of colors created an additional layer to your words which was pretty groovy. What an occasion, ha.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

3 Months Ago

Thank you for the kind review! Glad you liked it!
I love your poem and your note, both so poetic and well explained and expressed. Tyfs!!!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much for this revuew! Muchly appreciated!
Moon's fairest daughter

3 Months Ago

Review*...
Cyprian Van Dyke

3 Months Ago

You're most welcome! :)

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