Spring Pallete

Spring Pallete

A Chapter by Moon's fairest daughter

Paint me in the colors of Spring-
Egg yolk yellow, and
Sugar plum pink.
Turquoise of the clear sky,
and in shades of saffron and honey.
Bordeaux of a butterfly,
sour chardonnay green.

Paint me with a kaleidoscopic pallete
of violet specks and golden hues.
Paint me in fuschia and lime,
in topaz and peacock blue.

Paint me like the spring rains, that draw out
ripeness in Mangoes, Beets and Apricots.
Birthing sweet fat health,
even from corruption and rot.


© 2018 Moon's fairest daughter



Author's Note

Moon's fairest daughter
~A rather quick scribble, meant to keep the muse active~

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THIS IS WONDERFUL. I love the fullness and colorfullness of your metaphors. With each verse I read, I had a delightful picture of all the colors, shapes, sounds and even smells!!
I love it! BTW: nice to have you back :)
PD: I'd give it a score of 110 if I could ;)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

5 Months Ago

Heya!.....i just saw this comment today..dunno how i missed it
Moon's fairest daughter

5 Months Ago

About the song...wow that would be so interesting😍...but it's really not that great of a poem to .. read more
Fernando Dardón

5 Months Ago

Well, simple things can be as beautiful as complicated things, if you know how to use them. Then, ju.. read more



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Wow... I love this poem... It feels very refreshing and love the metaphors used. A lovely read

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
DarkMist

4 Months Ago

You're welcome :)
Your diction is superb here

Bordeaux of a butterfly
ripeness in Mangoes, Beets and Apricots

This is full, ripe and vivid.

One can almost feel the vibrant colors, scents and curves.

Great job.

And I love the ending. Spring/life contrasted to "corruption and rot"

Good little reminder to indulge while we still can.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much! This poem was more of a quickie. Didnot pay much attention to the words. Glad tha.. read more
Your spring palette truly delightful. Full of life and colour. Nicely done.

Chris

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Chris! ♡
Made me think of a glorious colourful rainbow perfect.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much!
Dawn

5 Months Ago

No, thank you!
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Like this, Love spring.
A quick scribble most of us would never manage even if Sat for a week.
What are the moon's other daughter's like ??

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much for the review! ♡
A wonderful poem to rouse the muse. Your words are as sweet as the meaning. Love it. :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much! It was rather a quick poem and did nothing to rouse my sleepy muse :'(
Gla.. read more
THIS IS WONDERFUL. I love the fullness and colorfullness of your metaphors. With each verse I read, I had a delightful picture of all the colors, shapes, sounds and even smells!!
I love it! BTW: nice to have you back :)
PD: I'd give it a score of 110 if I could ;)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

5 Months Ago

Heya!.....i just saw this comment today..dunno how i missed it
Moon's fairest daughter

5 Months Ago

About the song...wow that would be so interesting😍...but it's really not that great of a poem to .. read more
Fernando Dardón

5 Months Ago

Well, simple things can be as beautiful as complicated things, if you know how to use them. Then, ju.. read more
I liked the beauty you put in your writing. It was a bit difficult with some unknown words because English isn't my first language. At first I thought you were talking about actually painting a picture.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much for the review! I can understand your dilemma...i often experiment with learning n.. read more
Where's my paint brushes? This is an exquisite example of prose at its best - loved the stanza structure, word combinations and lyrical flow - a great read! Delicately beautiful … :-)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much! :))
It may not be a deep philosophical work but god damn does it read like smooth velvet on warm summer day.

I could read this over and over and over again.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

6 Months Ago

Haha thanks it was just a scribble without much philosophy attached :')

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