Spring Pallete

Spring Pallete

A Poem by Moon's fairest daughter

Paint me in the colors of Spring-
Egg yolk yellow, and
Sugar plum pink.
Turquoise of the clear sky,
and in shades of saffron and honey.
Bordeaux of a butterfly,
sour chardonnay green.

Paint me with a kaleidoscopic pallete
of violet specks and golden hues.
Paint me in fuschia and lime,
in topaz and peacock blue.

Paint me like the spring rains, that draw out
ripeness in Mangoes, Beets and Apricots.
Birthing sweet fat health,
even from corruption and rot.

© 2018 Moon's fairest daughter



Author's Note

Moon's fairest daughter
~A rather quick scribble, meant to keep the muse active~

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THIS IS WONDERFUL. I love the fullness and colorfullness of your metaphors. With each verse I read, I had a delightful picture of all the colors, shapes, sounds and even smells!!
I love it! BTW: nice to have you back :)
PD: I'd give it a score of 110 if I could ;)

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

3 Days Ago

Hey, stranger😛 how are you doing?
Fernando Dardón

1 Day Ago

Stranger? What da heck??? xD xD
I'm doing just fine, wondering when are you chatting with me .. read more
Fernando Dardón

1 Day Ago

Btw, would you like me to convert yout poem into a song?



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Gee
Like this, Love spring.
A quick scribble most of us would never manage even if Sat for a week.
What are the moon's other daughter's like ??

Posted 2 Days Ago


A wonderful poem to rouse the muse. Your words are as sweet as the meaning. Love it. :)

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

3 Days Ago

Thank you so much! It was rather a quick poem and did nothing to rouse my sleepy muse :'(
Gla.. read more
THIS IS WONDERFUL. I love the fullness and colorfullness of your metaphors. With each verse I read, I had a delightful picture of all the colors, shapes, sounds and even smells!!
I love it! BTW: nice to have you back :)
PD: I'd give it a score of 110 if I could ;)

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

3 Days Ago

Hey, stranger😛 how are you doing?
Fernando Dardón

1 Day Ago

Stranger? What da heck??? xD xD
I'm doing just fine, wondering when are you chatting with me .. read more
Fernando Dardón

1 Day Ago

Btw, would you like me to convert yout poem into a song?
I liked the beauty you put in your writing. It was a bit difficult with some unknown words because English isn't my first language. At first I thought you were talking about actually painting a picture.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

3 Days Ago

Thank you so much for the review! I can understand your dilemma...i often experiment with learning n.. read more
Where's my paint brushes? This is an exquisite example of prose at its best - loved the stanza structure, word combinations and lyrical flow - a great read! Delicately beautiful … :-)

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much! :))
It may not be a deep philosophical work but god damn does it read like smooth velvet on warm summer day.

I could read this over and over and over again.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

1 Week Ago

Haha thanks it was just a scribble without much philosophy attached :')
Beautiful imagery.you have talent for descriptive writing.well done

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

1 Week Ago

Thank you very much! :))
What a cracking little gem this turned out to be.... cheers for these words.........Neville

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

1 Week Ago

Thanks for visiting! Cheers!
Such sublime poetic shades and hues of you. It is truly a sacred wildness that covers the canvas of spring, and how you make every color a delicious life-giving song. Rise up from winter's death into your sweet life... please.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much for this gracious review!
An owl on the moon

1 Week Ago

So hope all is well in your world, dear poet.
dear muse,

you be nice to this sweet lovely girl! the colors are very becoming.

regards,
al

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Moon's fairest daughter

1 Week Ago

Hry al, thanks for reviewing this scribble!

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