Spring Pallete

Paint me in the colors of Spring-
Egg yolk yellow, and
Sugar plum pink.
Turquoise of the clear sky,
and in shades of saffron and honey.
Bordeaux of a butterfly,
sour chardonnay green.

Paint me with a kaleidoscopic pallete
of violet specks and golden hues.
Paint me in fuschia and lime,
in topaz and peacock blue.

Paint me like the spring rains, that draw out
ripeness in Mangoes, Beets and Apricots.
Birthing sweet fat health,
even from corruption and rot.

Author's Note

~A rather quick scribble, meant to keep the muse active~

Reviews

[Fernando Dardón]

THIS IS WONDERFUL. I love the fullness and colorfullness of your metaphors. With each verse I read, I had a delightful picture of all the colors, shapes, sounds and even smells!!
I love it! BTW: nice to have you back :)
PD: I'd give it a score of 110 if I could ;)

[Moonie]

Hey, stranger😛 how are you doing?

[Fernando Dardón]

Stranger? What da heck??? xD xD
I'm doing just fine, wondering when are you chatting with me again xD

[Fernando Dardón]

Btw, would you like me to convert yout poem into a song?

[Moonie]

Heya!.....i just saw this comment today..dunno how i missed it

[Moonie]

About the song...wow that would be so interesting😍...but it's really not that great of a poem to make a good song..

[Fernando Dardón]

Well, simple things can be as beautiful as complicated things, if you know how to use them. Then, just listen to "Love Me Do", simple lyrics yet wonderful song!

[KCthelastboyscout]

Beautiful imagery.you have talent for descriptive writing.well done

[Moonie]

Thank you very much! :))

[Neville]

What a cracking little gem this turned out to be.... cheers for these words.........Neville

[Moonie]

Thanks for visiting! Cheers!

[An owl on the moon]

Such sublime poetic shades and hues of you. It is truly a sacred wildness that covers the canvas of spring, and how you make every color a delicious life-giving song. Rise up from winter's death into your sweet life... please.

[Moonie]

Thank you so much for this gracious review!

[An owl on the moon]

So hope all is well in your world, dear poet.

[Alfred Kukitz]

dear muse,

you be nice to this sweet lovely girl! the colors are very becoming.

regards,
al

[Moonie]

Hry al, thanks for reviewing this scribble!

[Alecia]

Aww!! This made my heart happy!!👏🏻❤️

[Moonie]

Much thanks! ♡

[Mari' Emeraude]

What a simply luscious poem! Sweet and colorful, a treat for the senses.

[Moonie]

Thank you!!♡♡