The Girl Who Could Not Care

The Girl Who Could Not Care

A Poem by Niki
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Thanks to LivingDeath for the inspirational words and the picture too =)

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She sat across from me refusing to look at me..
-He sat across from me...I couldn't look into his deceiving eyes-
I tried to talk but she would not reply
-His lies came spilling out and I would not let them get to me...again-
I stare at her face looking at the lips I once kissed
-I feel his gaze on me, and where it used to send shivers of excitement through me now all it does is make me feel like another one of his victims-
I reach out to her attempting to heal the rift
-He reaches out to me I do nothing but look towards the sun, wishing it would burn out my eyes so I would never have to see his smile again-
Even as I touch her shoulder she does nothing but look away and that's when I know that she's gone
-I will never love again-

© 2011 Niki



Author's Note

Niki
Tell me if there's any grammar problems and so on..COMMENT!!! Your criticism is much needed!!
Nate

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Very well done. I like how you got both perspectives of the story here. Also the story behind it is one that many people can relate to. Very good job :) 10/ 10

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