Let Life Unfold

Let Life Unfold, But do what we must.

My Heart aches

From all the burden I am heaving.

Maybe my fault, Maybe not

I seem to be entangled in a web of problems.

Surrounded with people who love

Yet feeling lonely at times.

Why is it so?

I ask myself, but ends up blank.

I want answers

But there is no one to answer.

Yet patiently waiting for 

Life to unfold its course.

Reviews

[Anjali]

If I would have read your poem few years ago I would have agreed with you completely. However, now my opinion on such situation is to take your own responsibility for no one else will do it for you. Whatever happens face it & fight for it else no use over crying for the spilt milk!

Recently I have read somewhere that those who write poems are most depressed people & the reason it cited was because we are unable to express ourselves completely to our loved ones and these feelings end up the poet churning out beautiful words.

All I can do is to pray for you- to emerge stronger out of your storm. Wish you luck!

Regards,
Anjali

[Zephyr]

I agree with you
and thanks for dropping by:)

[wordman]

we all have it at times,even the wordman,but we cant wallow in it

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much wordman☺

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Maria]

Short yet to the point, and so true. Great Job!

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much maria;)

[rowan.taylorrr]

I feel this on so many levels. this explains depression and anxiety at the max. well done writing this!

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much Xoxo:)
I am glad you liked!

[Psychotic Lily]

Hahaha that's what I've been feeling for these past few days, and I finally got the answer. Depression...

Great poem! Keep writing!

[Zephyr]

You sure can get over it:)
I am still trying!
Thank you so much:)

[Bear]

This has a reality feel that raps its self around you as you read it and take it with you long after read. That is a great talent to have for a writer, you work isn't read and forgotten very quick. Bravo! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much:)
I actually feel like this!

[Abhishek Asthana]

short but it is so deep... many of us can relate to it...nicely written

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much:)
I am glad to read your words!

[Farhan Shaikh]

I agree with avinash..that's what i did..find yourself and loneliness will disappear..

[Zephyr]

I am happy for you:)
I am still in the process!

[Avinash]

You need to find yourself dear writer. Once you are able to do it that loneliness will disappear in a matter of seconds.

[Zephyr]

I am still trying to:)
I believe I will!

[Priyanshi]

Sometimes it does happen to everyone, but we must remain stronger at this stage of life....great poem.The poem has touched my heart, Neetha keep it up.

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much:)
I am glad to read your words!

[Priyanshi]

Always a pleasure, dear.