The fake world

People act so much that they forgot what reality is.

At times, we live

In a fake world.

 

Love & care are myths

And everything is an act.

 

We think they love us

But turn out hopelessly wrong.

 

And when realization dawns

We are shockingly shattered.

 

The world is the stage

And they the actors.

Author's Note

Reflects the loneliness I so strongly and sadly felt.
Anyway, I got over it!

Reviews

[Razer990]

I really felt this. Sometimes it's like the more the population grows the more it seems the people is this world choose to become shallow.

[Zephyr]

Yeah.....
Glad you enjoyed

[Hebe]

Most of the time people live behind masks... this is well spoken, you potrait the realization of the situation effectively!

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much, Hebe....Glad you enjoyed:)
Your review means a lot.....

[Hebe]

awww thank you.... anytime !

[Gee]

You wise up to these people as you age.
I like this muchly Naat

[Zephyr]

I agree....:)
Glad you enjoyed, Gee......

[incurableangel]

Sometimes this is very true. Your a good writer. This was short but good.

[Zephyr]

Thank you angel........
Glad you enjoyed.:)

[CAPOLAVORO]

As they say, you see the world as you are and not as it is. This is just a good piece of cake called reality but ideals do exist with it and for it. Seeing a fake world is relative. What might be good to you might not be good to me. There will always be reasons. Reasons why people hate and reasons why people hate. It is the ultimate quest. Nice piece. :)

[Zephyr]

You are right.........
The poem reflected my experiences.....
Thank you so much, dear......:)

[matrixmark]

A world of fakes. The world is a bizarre place, what with 'reality tv' and so much crap filling out minds and screens its a wonder that many good people are still left. But good people still do exist under the blotted landscape of 'the fake world'

Good piece, truthful and to the point.

Mark.

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much Mark!
I agree that good people do exist:)
So Glad!

[matrixmark]

You are very welcome.
Yep, they do exist but getting harder to find.

Mark.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

i agree with the last stanza...it's so true and i could relate to it...
truly written...great work naat!

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much Wajiha!
Glad you enjoyed my poem:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hey!
my pleasure...

[Farhan Shaikh]

True..
We really live in a fake world
Where some people pretend to be good but actually they turn out as something else..
I totally agree with your poem..and ut is a good poem

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much!
Glad you enjoyed it.

[Surya]

Soemetimes it's true...you feel them as actors, but sometimes I even feel strange with a thought that am I living in a circus...haha,..That's pretty cool Naat..I loved it..:)

[Zephyr]

living in a circus- You summed up my poem with a phrase.:)
Thank you so much, Surya!

[Surya]

Haha, You are welcome Naat..:)