Heavenly Drops

Rain: A Wonder

                                                      

                             The heavenly drops

                             Fall on the lush Greens

                             Blooming joy and relief to our Nature.

 

                             The heavenly drops

                             Beat against the glass panes

                             Bubbling memories cherished forever.

 

                             The heavenly drops

                              Caress our frail faces

                              Bringing smiles oh so sweet!    

                          

 

                            

                            

                                                 

Author's Note

When it rains, a sense of rhapsody engulfs us.
It is also the perfect time to read a book!

Reviews

[emipoemi]

A refrain for a start! Nice! Only note is the very last line kind of falls flat, given its lack of syllables to match the musicality of its counterparts in the other stanzas. This otherwise would be a great poem. Well done!

[L.C. Jarrette]

your poem brings smiles oh so sweet!

[Zephyr]

So sweet;)
Thank you Jarrette:)

[L.C. Jarrette]

my pleasure...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Marvellous!! I just love rain too and loved the way you expressed the rain with The heavenly drops.

[Zephyr]

Rain is magical;)
Thank you so much SKY:)

[rowan.taylorrr]

this brought me far into nature, it made me imagine a being out in the rain but being happy while doing it. love it

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much dear:)
Glad you enjoyed!

[pia]

What a captivating poem
Written with elegance and raw emotion i love it

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much Pia!
Glad to know you enjoyed😉

[pia]

Always a pleasure reviewing your work !!

[Joey Nizz]

This is really creative and beautiful!
Rain drops are beautiful followed by the rain.

Thanks for sharing :)

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much, Joey...
Am glad you liked.....:)

[Joey Nizz]

Your very much welcome ^^

[Chase Dylan]

Caress of heavenly drops and... Smiles oh so sweet... This bubbled with cherished memories, bloomed with happiness, and beat against the pane of transparent worry... Greenly penned...

[Zephyr]

A poetic review....
Am glad and also glad you enjoyed:)

[Chase Dylan]

A poetic... Poem...! Hah, my pleasure...

[Farhan Shaikh]

Beauty if the nature, wonderful poem...

[Zephyr]

Yeah it is...
Thank you so much, Farhan😄

[Sofia]

A serene nd lovable one...when it rains i really like to sit near the window nd read a book..or watch television 😁
U have a portrayed a perfect picture of the rainy season...the imagery was just flawless😊

[Zephyr]

I too like to read while it rains...:)
Thanks for the warm review dear...😉

[Sofia]

You're welcome!!

[Stacy Purvis]

This is so beautiful, gentle, serene. The words fall like gentle rain drops. The picture you've paired with it is accurate.
What a lovely read!

[Zephyr]

Thank you so much...
I am definitely glad to read your warm words...😂