My Lord...

My Lord...

A Poem by Neetha
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Jesus...My hero...My Lord...

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On the cross, he lay

Blood- bathed he was

My Lord.

 

He lived for us

He died for us

For our redemption.

 

Unparalleled and absolute

Forever and always

His Love glows.


© 2017 Neetha



Author's Note

Neetha
I love You Jesus.

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Very touching poem! I do think, however, it could be even more striking if it was written with a little bit more structure, like a senryu, for instance (5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables) and then three verses of that could enhance what you are trying to say :)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Beautiful and wonderful words for Jesus. Thank you Neetha for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


Neetha

5 Months Ago

I am glad to read this Coyote:)
Well done, Neetha. Your love for the Lord stands out. One suggestion...try letting the line 'for our redemption' stand alone. A small thing really.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Neetha

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much Ted:)
Beautiful love poem!
Tabby

Posted 7 Months Ago


Neetha

5 Months Ago

You are welcome dear Tabby!
Thank you so much Neetha. :) This poem brought back memories of my childhood education days at convent when I used to wonder who is this crucified so cruelly bathed in blood? Well, since I am Hindu so I did not had any idea until the day I got answers to all my questions when our class was taken to watch the Movie of Jesus Christ.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Neetha

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much Anjali:)
Glad to read that!
amen! i love this one. you should make more of this...his preeminence is just impossible to fathom.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Neetha

5 Months Ago

I agree Jarette:)
Profound and unparalleled expression of love... Very warmly penned...

Posted 7 Months Ago


Neetha

5 Months Ago

Thank you Silente:)
You have made this poetry Powerful.
And for sure, God makes everything Beautiful.
This poem touched me.💕❤
It has the power to regenerate faith in a lost soul.
I loved it.
Keep Writing ❤💕

Posted 7 Months Ago


Neetha

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much Rashi:)
Glad to read from you!
wonderful words...and amazing poetry...keep it up.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Neetha

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much Wajiha:)
I love poetry about God! I think it is so beautiful. This was well done. Congratulations!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Neetha

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much Melody!

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Added on July 7, 2017
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Neetha
Neetha

Kerala, India



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