Goodbye...

Goodbye...

A Poem by Neetha
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Solitude

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Love betrayed her

Leaving her to lurch

In a lonely world.

 

Alas she met him

Who promised her

To end her solitude forever.





© 2017 Neetha



Author's Note

Neetha
Here 'him' refers to death.
A poem for many lost loved ones...

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You exactly penned down my emotions. I want to add few more lines to make it exactly my situation.
Alas she met him
Who promised her
To end her solitude forever
Situation was such
She got no choice than to sacrifice their love
She was left alone again
I am glad I came across this :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neetha

1 Month Ago

I hope you will meet the person you deserve truly and who deserves you. I try to let go of the past .. read more
Najam Us Saher

1 Month Ago

Trying but it's difficult...
Neetha

1 Month Ago

I know.....



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Death is but the next step in the journey we all must take. Well done Neetha.

Posted 3 Days Ago


A sad poem shared. Death is never a goo date. You said a complete poem in so few words. Hard to do. Thank you Neetha for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Days Ago


Hi Neetha, very touching words and thoughts. We invest so much of ourselves in relationships.... maybe thats not so good, on the other hand what would life be without passion and risk! Lovely verse

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Wow simply outstanding. I liked this poem, by my perception I thought she met someone (man) but alas after reading your note that ended pretty sad. Anyways great work 👏👏👏

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Neetha

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much Anjali:)
Anjali

3 Weeks Ago

Most welcome 🙏😊
Love and life both can be difficult beyond imagination. Life goes through a series of ups and downs, challenges and rewards. On the other hand, love goes through different episodes too. Romance, togetherness, distance, separation, faithfulness, betrayal, heartbreak, and what not! It is, in itself, a challenge as well as a reward. But, I have always felt that a life without love is not life at all. Losing love is an end on its own. Specially for a soul that has tasted love even for once, for that existence carrying the loss of lost love is overburdening.

Nice words, good read. :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Neetha

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much Fahmida:)
The world is all too lonely..

Posted 1 Month Ago


Neetha

1 Month Ago

Thanks for the review Alex:)
After a long time, i got to read another writing of you.Loved the use of words, Neetha and a touching piece even.
keep on writing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Neetha

1 Month Ago

I am glad to read from you Priyanshi:)
Priyanshi

1 Month Ago

My pleasure.
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Zoe
A nice meaning behind it. Maybe you should change the word 'solitude' to 'loneliness' in the last line. Solitude has more or less a positive connotation I guess. Loneliness sounds more apt. Up to you though.
Like the personification of death here. Nicely done!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neetha

1 Month Ago

Thanks Zoe:)
And thanks for the suggestion:)
Zoe

1 Month Ago

No problem
nice poem and good way of detailing.

in my opinion don't find death as an escape from the problems of our life. Stand and face it like a solider and be a hero.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Najam Us Saher

1 Month Ago

Well said....👍
Neetha

1 Month Ago

I agree...
I penned this poem trying to express what a depressed person feels like.
Th.. read more
Abraham George

1 Month Ago

you both are welcome my friends
Giving in to death itself......anything is sometimes better than loneliness.

Solitude can exist in both life and death; impermanent in life depending on the strength of the heart. For to open it to another turns solitude into companionship.

A nice write.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neetha

1 Month Ago

Thank you Doodley!
We may feel death is an option, but it is not so.
I do not support .. read more

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Neetha
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Kerala, India



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