Goodbye...

Goodbye...

A Poem by Neetha
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Solitude

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Love betrayed her

Leaving her to lurch

In a lonely world.

 

Alas she met him

Who promised her

To end her solitude forever.





© 2017 Neetha



Author's Note

Neetha
Here 'him' refers to death.
A poem for many lost loved ones...

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You exactly penned down my emotions. I want to add few more lines to make it exactly my situation.
Alas she met him
Who promised her
To end her solitude forever
Situation was such
She got no choice than to sacrifice their love
She was left alone again
I am glad I came across this :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

I am glad I came across your words . I have met the one who deserves me and got engaged :)
A.. read more
Neetha

3 Months Ago

I am happy for you Najam:)
Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

😊😊😊😊😊



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nice poem and good way of detailing.

in my opinion don't find death as an escape from the problems of our life. Stand and face it like a solider and be a hero.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

Well said....👍
Neetha

8 Months Ago

I agree...
I penned this poem trying to express what a depressed person feels like.
Th.. read more
Abraham George

8 Months Ago

you both are welcome my friends
Giving in to death itself......anything is sometimes better than loneliness.

Solitude can exist in both life and death; impermanent in life depending on the strength of the heart. For to open it to another turns solitude into companionship.

A nice write.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neetha

8 Months Ago

Thank you Doodley!
We may feel death is an option, but it is not so.
I do not support .. read more
Bravo! It is never wise to look for love from others till you find it within yourself first. That is the first lesson of love that to many people now days don't practice. If you don't know how to make yourself happy then how can someone else? Well done my friend Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neetha

8 Months Ago

I am glad and flattered you liked it Bear:)
Your reviews are truly helpful:)
Damn... A jaw dropping poem, short but fierce and powerful...
Well done, keep it up! :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neetha

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much Shaan:)
Quite happy with how you described my poem..
a beautiful job,loved the image

Posted 8 Months Ago


Neetha

8 Months Ago

Glad to know that wordman:)
 wordman

8 Months Ago

my pleasure
You exactly penned down my emotions. I want to add few more lines to make it exactly my situation.
Alas she met him
Who promised her
To end her solitude forever
Situation was such
She got no choice than to sacrifice their love
She was left alone again
I am glad I came across this :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

I am glad I came across your words . I have met the one who deserves me and got engaged :)
A.. read more
Neetha

3 Months Ago

I am happy for you Najam:)
Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

😊😊😊😊😊

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Added on September 12, 2017
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Tags: Love, Solitude, Death

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Neetha
Neetha

Kerala, India



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