Merciless.

Merciless.

A Story by Neetha
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Gone

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The clock was ticking away the time. Mercilessly.


And he was in a pretty big dilemma. His palms were sweaty and his body tensed.


There was no visible reason for him to feel this way.


 Money & comfort were at his doorstep.


But he definitely knew the solution. One that would leave him at peace, at least, for the time being.


He opened his teak furnished drawer and took out a pouch.


He unzipped it and took his ‘solution’ out.


Eyes closed, and in one quick breath, he injected the drug into his whole being.


R. I. P

 

 

 

 

 

 


© 2017 Neetha



Author's Note

Neetha
Drug addiction kills the vibrant young minds and bodies.
Stay away from it.
Self- control is the key.

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i have read quite a few articles regarding drug addiction in this website... and you tried your best to impart maximum from this shorter piece...we should never let these small pouches ruin our entire life, throw it away... life is precious and these kind of drugs are next step to suicide

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Neetha

1 Year Ago

Yes I agree.
Thank you for the review!
Ironic that - as he slipped away - he may have felt more in control of his destiny than in his entire Life.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Neetha

1 Year Ago

He may have...
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Zoe
A sad circumstance, isn't it. True words- composure is absolutely necessary. The pace increases with each line. Neatly done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Neetha

1 Year Ago

Thank you Zoe!
Zoe

1 Year Ago

My pleasure
Grim reality of youngsters who kill themselves. Nicely written up the facts.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Neetha

1 Year Ago

I am glad to read from you Najam:)

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Added on October 3, 2017
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Neetha
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Kerala, India



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