Maybe it's love..

Maybe it's love..

A Poem by The other Me

I can see the way you look at me

You tease me like you tease no one else

Your arms find their way around me

You look for excuses to hug me, hold me, be near me

And you think no one notices

Oh yeah, I can see through your eyes

I know what you’re thinking

“Maybe it’s love..”

 

We’ve got our friends, trying to make us see

How perfect we are for each other

But I’m always trying to get rid of these thoughts

Maybe I’m afraid..

Afraid to touch the fire again, after some love story gone wrong before

But then when you ignore me

Why does it drive me crazy?

Sometimes you’re jaded, but oh, so lovely

And then we’re confused again

“Maybe it’s love..”

 

I know I troubled you at times

But if this catches your attention

I might be doing it again

It’s so pathetic how none of us can say it aloud

Maybe you were waiting for me

I thought love wasn’t a friend of mine

Till you came along

Every time I’m with you, it’s like I’m wearing a crown

So now…I think you don’t have to wait any longer

And I think I’m ready to step across the line

Cause guess what…maybe love has come our way   =)

© 2010 The other Me


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I set this too the person I love. This poem had me draw closer to them. Thank you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful poem. I am a sucker for love poems. In a very dopey way it reminds me of how I feel about my boyfriend and how I felt when he and I first met, especially the final stanza. I didn't think love was a friend of mine until I met him.
Lovely words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful poem! I really found this writing to be very beautiful. I love reading happy love stories. Great work!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice job on this poem. I really enjoyed reading it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


i have no words because it was so touchy.i loved the poem.It reminded of my true love.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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C
Those simple actions that slowly indicates love! Your poem was very realistic and sweet. I relate to it completely! Thanks for writing this one :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Words direct from the heart!!!!!!Nice one!! (y)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lovely sentiments. We've all been in that place where if feels like love by our own self-doubt and suspicion of the world hinders out embracing the feeling.

NOTES: Last line could be a more definitive denouement. Something like:
'Cause, guess what… Baby, love has come our way.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Ben
Nice poem, really nice , its a beautiful poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful! I love the 'maybe it's love' and I love that you repeat it :) The picture is really cool too! :) Great job with this! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on December 23, 2009
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A Poem by The other Me