Pick pocket

Pick pocket

A Poem by Shane William


Running my fingers
through the folds
of your clothing,
Till I find that piece of you
kept hidden so well

I pocket what I need
and resign to charity
spelling out romantic gestures
with the tips of my fingers

I've got you on my lips
blowing breezes
to summer skin
and I'm picking your locks
unbuttoning your chains
stealing your curves
with a sleight of hand

~Keeping every moment
for my selfish, shoebox heart

© 2013 Shane William


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I think this is probably one of my favorites from you, Shane. You have wound together the perfect bit of imagery and metaphor into a package that is not only sensual, but also filled with deep longing. I don't know whether to feel happy or sad in finishing this piece, and I think that is the beauty of it. This is real life...we are all takers in a way, and we are all givers too. To save those things most precious, little treasures in our own "shoebox hearts"...what a great image.

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Shane William

10 Years Ago

Oh, it's nothing. But really, thanks, it means a lot to me to know you like my writing and why.



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You painted a beautiful piece of art, one that left me entranced; cast under your sensual spell. I loved it! You used such great imagery, that had me compelled to keep reading on. Beautifully penned.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shane William

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it :)
I think this is probably one of my favorites from you, Shane. You have wound together the perfect bit of imagery and metaphor into a package that is not only sensual, but also filled with deep longing. I don't know whether to feel happy or sad in finishing this piece, and I think that is the beauty of it. This is real life...we are all takers in a way, and we are all givers too. To save those things most precious, little treasures in our own "shoebox hearts"...what a great image.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shane William

10 Years Ago

Oh, it's nothing. But really, thanks, it means a lot to me to know you like my writing and why.
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Dye
Love the title, it just fits perfectly with this sweet read. Very nice indeed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Shane William

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the kind words.
Awesome, Shane...really typical for us men to have shoe box lol brilliant write. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Shane William

10 Years Ago

Thanks Ev, you'd know better than anyone (bout that shoebox).
Babe Roxx

10 Years Ago

Lol yeah...apparently all the other guys I know too...that's why you are do brilliant, Shane. ;)
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