Losing

Losing

A Story by NerdyBeauty
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Just thinking

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Fear of losing.
Losing oneself.

One's faith,
inner contentment
and love. 

Losing oneself - 
is ~ horrible ...


© 2017 NerdyBeauty



Author's Note

NerdyBeauty
I wish I may never lose the aforementioned.

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this was really simple and yet so beautifully written.
i feel its more of a poem than a story but i love the wisdom you set here. you beautifully introduced what it means to lose something
that something being yourself and all the other factors that make you a person. Real loss in life comes from a persons self loss.
wonderful work!!! always happy to read your work

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NerdyBeauty

2 Months Ago

Thanks a lot. Pia. I am glad U liked it. ((Hugs))



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Simply stating some powerful emotions. Good work. :)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NerdyBeauty

2 Weeks Ago

Thank U very much.
aine

2 Weeks Ago

You're welcome
In as much as I really liked what you wrote here and quite agree to the message, I'd say writing it like this would be more impactful, especially the last line which should be separated to give a more finer/stronger impact. Just my thoughts on this. You write well.

Fear of losing.
Losing oneself.

One's faith,
inner contentment
and love.

Losing oneself -
is ~ horrible ...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NerdyBeauty

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much, Yumna. I appreciate your constructive comment. And I really liked the way you sug.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Month Ago

Thank you too for taking it as constructive :) always a pleasure reading good works 😊 you're welc.. read more
NerdyBeauty

1 Month Ago

Very Welcome again. :P
I wish you could place 'losing oneself' at the second last line, just before 'is horrible'. This would make the overall impact of the poem; saying that you are losing yourself completely after losing faith and contentment. Just a thought

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NerdyBeauty

1 Month Ago

Thanks a lot, Ashwin. I will surely consider it.
I liked your constructive thought. :)))
Fear is perhaps our greatest foe. It to shall pass

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, its horrible. And scary too. Yet one finds such joy in finding oneself again. I loved this brief yet such insightful write.


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NerdyBeauty

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much :)
You've penned a little poem like a prayer with a lot going for it here Nerdy.


Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NerdyBeauty

2 Months Ago

Thanks a lot, Tony. :)
So poignant and so powerful. What have we left to face this world if not our identity, our faith, our peace, and love itself that binds all else together. May you only find yourself fulfilled more each day, dear poet.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NerdyBeauty

2 Months Ago

Thanks a lot , Craig. :)
this was really simple and yet so beautifully written.
i feel its more of a poem than a story but i love the wisdom you set here. you beautifully introduced what it means to lose something
that something being yourself and all the other factors that make you a person. Real loss in life comes from a persons self loss.
wonderful work!!! always happy to read your work

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NerdyBeauty

2 Months Ago

Thanks a lot. Pia. I am glad U liked it. ((Hugs))
I think the sense of fear in this is what proves you are aware of what truly matters and hold these things in high regard. Many people lack this sense of self. Very good read once again! Simply put but well defined.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NerdyBeauty

2 Months Ago

Thanks a lot. Britebeth. :)
You are wise my friend. All you've mentioned, I believe, are interconnected. Some people drift along with no centered place in their hearts. Poor them.

Nicely said, Nerdy. :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NerdyBeauty

2 Months Ago

Thanks Relic. :)

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