Desire

Desire

A Poem by Ghania

The heart wants,
What the soul desires.
Let it demand,
Before the time expires.

© 2017 Ghania



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Zoe
True. We should never be hard on ourselves. Life is short. Live it to the fullest.
Nicely done!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

2 Months Ago

Thanks for your words here. =)
Zoe

2 Months Ago

You're welcome :)
Desire rules us all, just as we were born from it, and into it. And as you say, our time is short, so why not chase our desires while we can. You express a lot in a short poem. Very nice. :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Ghania

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your words here, Jake. :)
Very thoughtful. I really liked this.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

2 Months Ago

Thanks a lot for your kind words here, Najam :)
Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

You're welcome ☺
So short, yet says so much! Nice work.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

3 Months Ago

Thanks alot, Aine. :)
Enjoyed this. made me think that we have limited time in this world, thus we need to live the most of it doing the things we love; maybe as I am doing right now, reading and writing:)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Ghania

4 Months Ago

Thank you!
Very pithy and nicely rhymed. Loved the economy of expression. Yes, let the heart demand before the big clock runs out. The problem is that sometimes what the heart thinks it must have is not what soul has in mind. Well done.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

4 Months Ago

Thanks for your thoughts.
Appreciate it. :)))
This piece is elegant. Really captures the reader.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

4 Months Ago

Thanks a lot. :)
You said it all in these beautifully entwined words. Riveting thought.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

4 Months Ago

Thanks a lot. :)
You are spot on here and I love it. Before the time ecpires. Indeed, there will come a time when strength will wane and desires will be like dried strings hung up on a rope, long forgotten. Beautiful poetry from you.

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Ghania

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Divya :)
What a beautiful longing to have the heart fulfilled by the deep desires of the soul. May we all learn to listen to the quiet places in us that speak so purely. Blessings!

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Ghania

4 Months Ago

Thanks a lot, Craig. ((Hearts))
An owl on the moon

4 Months Ago

Always happy to see you writing more. :)
Ghania

4 Months Ago

😊😊 God bless you.

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Ghania
Ghania

Punjab, Pakistan



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