Desire

Desire

A Poem by NerdyBeauty

The heart wants,
What the soul desires.
Let it demand,
Before the time expires.

© 2017 NerdyBeauty



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So short, yet says so much! Nice work.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NerdyBeauty

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks alot, Aine. :)
Enjoyed this. made me think that we have limited time in this world, thus we need to live the most of it doing the things we love; maybe as I am doing right now, reading and writing:)

Posted 1 Month Ago


NerdyBeauty

1 Month Ago

Thank you!
Very pithy and nicely rhymed. Loved the economy of expression. Yes, let the heart demand before the big clock runs out. The problem is that sometimes what the heart thinks it must have is not what soul has in mind. Well done.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NerdyBeauty

1 Month Ago

Thanks for your thoughts.
Appreciate it. :)))
This piece is elegant. Really captures the reader.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NerdyBeauty

1 Month Ago

Thanks a lot. :)
You said it all in these beautifully entwined words. Riveting thought.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NerdyBeauty

1 Month Ago

Thanks a lot. :)
You are spot on here and I love it. Before the time ecpires. Indeed, there will come a time when strength will wane and desires will be like dried strings hung up on a rope, long forgotten. Beautiful poetry from you.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NerdyBeauty

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much, Divya :)
What a beautiful longing to have the heart fulfilled by the deep desires of the soul. May we all learn to listen to the quiet places in us that speak so purely. Blessings!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

NerdyBeauty

1 Month Ago

Thanks a lot, Craig. ((Hearts))
An owl on the moon

1 Month Ago

Always happy to see you writing more. :)
NerdyBeauty

1 Month Ago

😊😊 God bless you.

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NerdyBeauty
NerdyBeauty

Punjab, Pakistan



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