Love

Love

A Poem by Ghania
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I am getting over serious Writer's block. And I know this (what I have just written) is not even a poem.

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"Love is a poison.
Spiteful, yet sweet
All~at the same time..."




© 2017 Ghania



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Ghania
I am learning. :)

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So very beautiful,
I like this write and the picture used.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you do much for your words here. =)
You seem to know love so well, and your words confess the depths of it, the flow of it, the tenderness and fierceness of it. So good to be reading your words again, dear friend.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

1 Month Ago

Ha ha. You're so humble and a great, great person.
God bless You💕.
An owl on the moon

1 Month Ago

Dear you! You are a great, great friend. May God's blessing rest on you. 💕
Ghania

1 Month Ago

Thanks a ton😊
Aye, love is that and more, so aptly said...
While I know this is a haiku what you wrote, I think 'and yet' isn't grammatically correct. 'and' here is unnecessary. Maybe write it as a quote or in a single line. The impact doesn't change btw ;) :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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1 Month Ago

I love the pic btw :))
Ghania

1 Month Ago

Thank you Yumna. The way you wrote it, was the way I wrote it.(intially) And I am really more comfor.. read more
Ghania

1 Month Ago

O yes! The pic.❤
I can understand your feelings. Many feel this way being love can be like a two way street. It can go one way, then suddenly change direction leaving us bitter and angry. That's the way life is sometimes.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

1 Month Ago

There are always different perspectives and sides to everything. That is what makes everyone differe.. read more
dear frnd,
its really awesome about ur work.the picture was the main attraction/i really loved ur work.keep well;
by rj

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

1 Month Ago

Oh yes, a picture speaks a thousand words, you know. :P
Rajashree Rj

1 Month Ago

THAT WAS AMAZING..
Ghania

1 Month Ago

:")))) 💓💓
Love is a poison
It is spiteful and yet sweet
All at the same time.
If you make the above changes, it will be a perfect haiku (5 7 5 syllables)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

1 Month Ago

han han! Mein bhi yehe soch rahi thee. LOL. It's the same in URDU. Well, the way you described tho, .. read more
Najam Us Saher

1 Month Ago

Hahahaha. Glad I could find suitable words which spell the same, I must learn phonotics to make my n.. read more
Ghania

1 Month Ago

Ha ha. You must now. LOL. :)
I think I have to too. :P

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Added on November 29, 2017
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Ghania
Ghania

Punjab, Pakistan



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