Revived

Revived

A Poem by Ghania
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Sensual

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Serenity of my heart: dissolved.
Love of my life: detained.
Breath of my lungs: distorted.

In all the longings my being takes,
In all the flavours my tongue tastes,

It is you that is availed.
It is you that is availed.

~You

© 2017 Ghania



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wow! this is such a sweet and loving poem that's beautifully written. I love how you structured the words, and from beginning, middle and end, the flow has a kinetic energy to it, a lead up, a conclusive tone, a momentum, a certain urgency expressing the depth of love that is in you.

WELL DONE

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I liked your style of writing. Had feel of the ancient writers. I liked this poem. Old fashion feel and logic in the words. Thank you Ghania for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

7 Months Ago

Thanks a lot. Your words here are appreciated. =)
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
wow! this is such a sweet and loving poem that's beautifully written. I love how you structured the words, and from beginning, middle and end, the flow has a kinetic energy to it, a lead up, a conclusive tone, a momentum, a certain urgency expressing the depth of love that is in you.

WELL DONE

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

much enjoyed this write,
awesome wording.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

9 Months Ago

Thank you. =)
Here you've chosen the most unusual aspects to highlight, when it comes to a sensual interaction! Dissolved serenity . . . detained love . . . distorted breath!?!?! At first these seemed the opposite of what one might expect in a sensual situation. But then I had to think about each detail you crafted here & I realized this is the kind of original writing I most crave on this website (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

9 Months Ago

Thank you Margie. I am pleased to know you liked this one.
You're right. Sensual writes are .. read more
barleygirl

9 Months Ago

Definitely making sense! *smile* Always love hearing about a poet's process!
Ghania

9 Months Ago

Thank you Margie. =)
You create such a moving music of your soul in these words. There is the pausing of the heart, of love, of life, and yet all of you is lifted to this wondrous world of renewal, of newness. Magnificent!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much. Your words here are always appreciated. =)
An owl on the moon

9 Months Ago

It's always a joy to see you writing again. :)

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Added on December 27, 2017
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Ghania
Ghania

Rawalpindi , Punjab, Pakistan



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