Revived

Revived

A Poem by Ghania
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Sensual

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Serenity of my heart: dissolved.
Love of my life: detained.
Breath of my lungs: distorted.

In all the longings my being takes,
In all the flavours my tongue tastes,

It is you that is availed.
It is you that is availed.

~You

© 2017 Ghania



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Here you've chosen the most unusual aspects to highlight, when it comes to a sensual interaction! Dissolved serenity . . . detained love . . . distorted breath!?!?! At first these seemed the opposite of what one might expect in a sensual situation. But then I had to think about each detail you crafted here & I realized this is the kind of original writing I most crave on this website (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you Margie. I am pleased to know you liked this one.
You're right. Sensual writes are .. read more
barleygirl

1 Week Ago

Definitely making sense! *smile* Always love hearing about a poet's process!
Ghania

3 Hours Ago

Thank you Margie. =)



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much enjoyed this write,
awesome wording.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you. =)
Here you've chosen the most unusual aspects to highlight, when it comes to a sensual interaction! Dissolved serenity . . . detained love . . . distorted breath!?!?! At first these seemed the opposite of what one might expect in a sensual situation. But then I had to think about each detail you crafted here & I realized this is the kind of original writing I most crave on this website (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you Margie. I am pleased to know you liked this one.
You're right. Sensual writes are .. read more
barleygirl

1 Week Ago

Definitely making sense! *smile* Always love hearing about a poet's process!
Ghania

3 Hours Ago

Thank you Margie. =)
You create such a moving music of your soul in these words. There is the pausing of the heart, of love, of life, and yet all of you is lifted to this wondrous world of renewal, of newness. Magnificent!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ghania

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much. Your words here are always appreciated. =)
An owl on the moon

3 Weeks Ago

It's always a joy to see you writing again. :)

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Added on December 27, 2017
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Ghania
Ghania

Punjab, Pakistan



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Ghania I'm 18. A Medical Student. An avid reader and writer. Tracing the things and memories from the backyard of emotions. Very friendly and optimistic. Still learning to write. more..

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