Revived

Sensual

Serenity of my heart: dissolved.
Love of my life: detained.
Breath of my lungs: distorted.

In all the longings my being takes,
In all the flavours my tongue tastes,

It is you that is availed.
It is you that is availed.

~You

Reviews

[BlackPrince]

wow! this is such a sweet and loving poem that's beautifully written. I love how you structured the words, and from beginning, middle and end, the flow has a kinetic energy to it, a lead up, a conclusive tone, a momentum, a certain urgency expressing the depth of love that is in you.

WELL DONE

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked your style of writing. Had feel of the ancient writers. I liked this poem. Old fashion feel and logic in the words. Thank you Ghania for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Ghania]

Thanks a lot. Your words here are appreciated. =)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[poetgurl]

much enjoyed this write,
awesome wording.

[Ghania]

Thank you. =)

[barleygirl]

Here you've chosen the most unusual aspects to highlight, when it comes to a sensual interaction! Dissolved serenity . . . detained love . . . distorted breath!?!?! At first these seemed the opposite of what one might expect in a sensual situation. But then I had to think about each detail you crafted here & I realized this is the kind of original writing I most crave on this website (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Ghania]

Thank you Margie. I am pleased to know you liked this one.
You're right. Sensual writes are often more intimate, laced with togetherness.
But I have read in our (Urdu) language literature that mostly the sensual writes are those which lack intimacy but still inculcate the desire of the beloved. In which you're far but you're still close at hearts. So I was a little inclined to try my pen over that kind of poetry.
Did it make sense?
((Hugs back))
💕💕

[barleygirl]

Definitely making sense! *smile* Always love hearing about a poet's process!

[Ghania]

Thank you Margie. =)

[An owl on the moon]

You create such a moving music of your soul in these words. There is the pausing of the heart, of love, of life, and yet all of you is lifted to this wondrous world of renewal, of newness. Magnificent!

[Ghania]

Thank you so much. Your words here are always appreciated. =)

[An owl on the moon]

It's always a joy to see you writing again. :)