No It's Not Promotion

 

No it’s not promotion

Just another flight of stairs

But hey

Who the f**k is counting

And then again

Who cares?

Reviews

[Circe]

oh gosh I have totally had this feeling in the corporate institution, and you're right, nobody cares.. jerry seinfeld said that the employee/employer agreement is ridiculous, it's impossible to organise the unorganisable and compartmentalise people, it's funny when you think about how robotic we try to make our society but it doesn't really work at all.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is too funny in an ironic way...i like places where we get promotions, jobwise, but for the same money.

[Neville]

many thanks jacob, Best Wishes, Neville

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Very clever piece.
Well done.

[Neville]

Thank you Delaney, much appreciated, All Good Things, N

[Damien Davison]

I love your ability to write very short pieces, it's respectable. I like the sum of ideas. Also, I enjoy the variations of your work, I appreciate a writer not afraid to explore and diversify. Thanks for sharing!

[Neville]

I genuinely appreciate your comments, keep reading and forget the big N. All good Things, neville

[Audrey Howitt]

Love this write--simple in form, and that works so well for it---Great and gritty piece that you can come back to again and again--and it certainly does make one think

[Neville]

Many thanks for your kind comments Audrey, All Good Things, Neville

[R J Askew]

cracking write .. cogent and hard .. yet it also has pleasing poetic form and this makes it .. above all I like the attitude behind it

[Neville]

Thank you again RJ isn't it amazing how good a positive review can make one feel. AGT's N

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Often, it's just more thankless responsibility that someone else left! Love how you likened it to "another flight of stairs"...no rest, just keep moving up.

[Neville]

Up sounds good, I plan to aim in that direction. Ta muchley. N

[Karen Chadde]

I thought this was a very odd piece at first, but a great poem makes one thinks - and this one certainly does! To me, this person ignoring their true calling by accepting a pseudo promotion onward to another flight of stairs of nothingness. May he toil in his dreariness. Great poem, looking forward to reading more of your work!

[Neville]

Many thanks karen, your comments are much appreciated. All Good Things, Neville

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Neville Pettitt, do I detect a modicum of anger in this well written piece?

[Neville]

No, not one bit, satyre maybe, an observation of other folks perceptions certainly but with only 89 days to go before hanging up my prescription pad etc, I can only feel a certain sense of achievement tinged with a little apprehension maybe. N

[New Dawn]

How right you are - promotions eh - i've been avoiding them for years - nasty vicious little things - run quickly run! great write Neville

[Neville]

Thank you so much. I retire in 89 days time on December 10th so I am not gonna run but rather aim to hobble over the finish line in one piece. all Good Things my friend, N

[New Dawn]

Ah well thats totally different - have about 20 years to go myself so you don't mind if I avoid them do you? keep hobbling I can see the finishing tape from here :)

[Neville]

Ha ha, thanks & no, just keep avoiding. N

[Creepy Swine Guy]

It is amazing how easily we can be manipulated with appeals to our egos. We are told that we are being promoted and we continue to chase the next carrot as our minutes tick away.

[Neville]

Darn right creepy if you ask me Creepy eh - Thanks again. N