Wotcha Gonna Do

Wotcha Gonna Do

 

Wotcha gonna do tonight?

I’m maybe gonna kill myself just a little bit

Then later just a little bit more

In John Lennon Park Menocal along with all the other

Punks, Goths, Emos, Vamps and Lycanthropes who hang out there

Underneath the new Havana moon

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

Damn! have to admit I am in Sam D's court on this one... not sure your intent ... but feel a hammer blow to my chest and breath is knocked out of me... would have never known of the park in Havana .. can not "imagine" ... the dark representations of goths, etc exists in Cuba.. feeling like a sheltered naive child.. such deep sorrow and pain connected with JL ... passed from generation to generation ... such a huge question why...your stark contrast with Havana moon is piercing.. what a fantastic statement and poem..
E.

[Neville]

Neither I nor the string of words you refer to are deserving of your compliment E.N but I certainly like them, yes indeed, I like them a lot. It is also reassuring to know that S.D is not alone. All Good Things, N

[Neon]

Your feelings're well expressed into the piece. Nice work.

[Neville]

Very kind of you to stop by for a while. Thanks,
Neville

[Circe]

you know just how to get under the psyche, the humanity and the poetic underground of so many pent up emotions and you write it like a song that you might already the words to. beautiful.

[Neville]

Now your gonna make me blush... AGT's N

[Tate Morgan]

Well myself I am trying vodka tonight and I hope it does the same thing for me. Nevil I am glad to see you tonight

[Neville]

Much appreciated Tate. I am presently very busy trying to arrange a volunteer placement in an African Psychiatric hospital around January time so have not spent a lot of time on Writerscafe recently. I note you have been very active here though & I will reciprocate within the very near future. All Good Things,

Neville

[emmajoy]

What it is to iive and play in a half world in the making, where anything.everything goes. And so the clock moves, on and on, spiraling downwards; that mix of folk 'long with it. Your words need thought, dark and juggled that they are; once considered they smudge one's thinking, whilst doing even more to your participants' minds: ' .. maybe gonna kill myself just a little bit ~ Then later just a little bit more.. ' Here you punch out the words with a seemingly down to earth question, then... quietly erupt into an after dark society.

[Neville]

Many thanks Emma, your comments are very much appreciated. All Good Things, N

[Neville]

Hey Jon,

thank you so much very for these sentiments, they genuinely mean such a great deal to me my good 'Friend'

Since my 'semi' retirement in December I have downloaded a few photo's from the former EMWG & have on numerous occasions consequently thought about you. I suppose because we seemed able to (excuse the pun) 'connect.' Get in touch & maybe we can meet up and have a darn good laugh again. Until then, All Good Things my Friend, Nev

[Jon Hogg]

Nice one Nev! - Love the 'atti-tood' in your poem - Paints a vivid picture/ scenario in very few words - Which means it's well written and immensely readable!

ATB, jon

[Neville]

Thanks for these words Jon, AGT's N

[Jon Hogg]

You're very welcome Nev! - Thanks for your reply -I'll be in touch,
ATB, Jon

[Emily B]

every night dying
and every morning being born again

we lose a little light every time, ya know?

[Neville]

I do know, I sure do. Thanks Emily, all Good things, N

[Emily B]

all good things

[Neville]

Cheers Emily, AGT's N

[Sami Khalil]

A sense some darkness in this poem but I do like it ...Well done. I like how you have mentioned all these groups...:)

[Neville]

Cheers Sami, I also left a few groups out. All Good Things, your old Friend, Neville

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...AGT

[Samuel Dickens]

I can't say I fully understand this, but it's cooool.

[Neville]

Hey no problem Samuel, I appreciate an honest opinion. AGT's N