Reflections

Reflections

A Poem by Neville
"

Sometimes things are not always what they seem....

"

Reflections

 

The bridge

 cast a scythe shaped shadow

that just happened to clip the horizontal ladder

as it arched away from the setting sun

 

~~~~

 

nus gnittes eht morf yawa dehcra ti sa

reddal latnoziroh eht pilc ot deneppah tsuj that

wodahs depahs ehtycs a tsac

egdirb ehT

 

snoitcelfeR 

© 2015 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
ahc'tnod yhw tuo ti kcehc

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Inside the machine I hear a banging. It looks a lot like a bridge, and the shadow cast does not have to be a scythe. But that's just where this takes me. Very clever.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

Love it when ya talk ..... like that my friend....cheers, I owe ya...... N
Your cleverness is leaping off the page in this one! You must have a spacial (as well as a special) way of perceiving your world & therefore how you design the page layout of your messages to SHOW your observations . . . PLUS! The bridge & the scythe -- that is such a brilliant juxtaposition! (((NUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

You are very generous Margie and I like it... I like it a lot........ Nug, Nug.... Neville
Such a checked-out cleverness. There's nothing quite like looking back!


Posted 5 Years Ago


emmajoy

5 Years Ago

Might be, could be.. :)
Neville

5 Years Ago

I will take that as a might be maybe... Neville
emmajoy

5 Years Ago

or maybe a might be perhaps, who knows.
Very nice use of words and thoughts my friend. Always a pleasure to read your work.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

Always a pleasure to hear from you John... I fly back to the UK tomorrow and will visit your pages u.. read more
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

I love your work and have a safe trip.
Neville

5 Years Ago

Cheers Friend.... N
must say very creatively written

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

Must say much appreciated then, cheers..... Neville
Aaron

5 Years Ago

your most welcome
Very creative. Only blip I saw was that you spelt "that" front-wise on the reflection as well. Very cool poem indeed.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

Hey LKBillips aka hawkeye, In the words of the great Pink Floyd, leave my blips alone.....joking asi.. read more
LKBillips

5 Years Ago

!emoclew yrev er'uoY
Neville

5 Years Ago

Cheers Hawkeye....... Neville
Egami ylevol a DNA, revelc yrev.
Eirrehc:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

xx eirrehC ay sselB
Cherrie Palmer

5 Years Ago

Lol or loL
Neville

5 Years Ago

Now that is clever....... Neville
check it out why don'tcha and your second stanza a replica of the first, and title but back to front. Now I need to work on the meaning. Good evening Neville.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

Ouch, okay, now ya got a choice between a cigar or a coconut............ N
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

I'll take the coconut. Shake the milk out of it and you can put it in my afternoon tea lol
Neville

5 Years Ago

Consider it done.........N
Nice, I liked how you added a foreign language into it for those who don't understand English. I liked how you can actually imagine the scenery.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

How very kind of you to visit, many thanks... Neville
you are missing the t in reflections :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

8 Years Ago

Now that is what I call a good eye, 10/10 for observation, cheers Emily & thank you
Emily B

8 Years Ago

I enjoyed the challenge!

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Added on April 27, 2015
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