Assessing the Blues

Assessing the Blues

A Poem by Neville Pettitt

Assessing the Blues

I see you and

You are not blue

Most definitely not

Mediterranean

Chows tongue

Or Maltese sky blue

 

I see you

In fact I can see

right through you

I hear you

You don’t sound blue

Most definitely not

True

Berry

Powder

Paint-box

Or duck egg blue

 

On the contrary

I can see

and I can hear you too

For what it's worth

I would not consider

yourself blue

If I was you

I would consider

myself read

 

 

 

 


© 2017 Neville Pettitt



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Some times I have to read more than once, still I come back for more reading!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

How very kind, I am truly honoured...N
Mrudula Rani

2 Weeks Ago

Pleasure is mine.
Just realised there's a lot of blue about.
Blue on blue. Blue murder.
The blues.
Or the classic. What shade of blue should we paint the room. Red, dear.


Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

You got it, nothing wrong with your powers of observation for sure although, on reflection maybe you.. read more
love the structure...and the positive tone...and great play on words, especially the last line...at least as i "red" it!

:)))

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

Ha, good on you jacob, 10/10 red correctly. Many thank you's...Neville
Cute play on words...read v red. So many shades of blue, but none need to be our emotions while reading wonderful poetry like this. I liked it. lydi**

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


very very nice and thanks for sharing,

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Neville Pettitt

4 Weeks Ago

Very, very kind and thanks for viewing
Reading people is not easy. I like the confidence here. Love the varied shades of blue!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

1 Month Ago

Thank you Divya, much appreciated ...N
DIVYA

1 Month Ago

You are so welcome!
Brilliant & playful & clever! Good play on words with a satisfying twist at the end. Please don't be blue . . . unless it's blueberry, then it's OK (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

1 Month Ago

Bless ya Margie, a woman with taste too, my bowl runneth over.........N
A canny near-canine view of how it is, how perception strikes a thought and its servant pen. Read twice, unsure its route but tis Intriguing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

1 Month Ago

If I have trigued you, then I have achieved something. Thank you emmajoy

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Neville Pettitt
Neville Pettitt

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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