Transparency

Transparency

A Poem by Neville Pettitt
"

At a time when transparency is so.....well you know

"

Transparency

 

The

Pedestal

 You

 Created

 For

 Me

  Was

Of

 Crystal

 

So

 The

 Whole

 World

Could

See

All

 My

 Flaws

And

 The

 Cracks

 

  And 

 The

 No

 Looking

 Backs

 

 Plus 

All

 The

 Mistakes

 I

 Made

 About

 Thee

.


© 2017 Neville Pettitt



Author's Note

Neville Pettitt
If you look carefully enough, you might just see write through him.........

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interesting ... kind of like the snake eating itself ;{ ... i have not thought about being put on a pedestal but have certainly done it to many a woman ;) never worked out ...crystal clear reality is much healthier eh!? i really like this form you use ...its pleasing to the eye and leads me in a smooth read ..
E.


Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

Then I am not only a happy man but a literally fulfilled one to boot, cheers my friend .....N



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interesting ... kind of like the snake eating itself ;{ ... i have not thought about being put on a pedestal but have certainly done it to many a woman ;) never worked out ...crystal clear reality is much healthier eh!? i really like this form you use ...its pleasing to the eye and leads me in a smooth read ..
E.


Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

Then I am not only a happy man but a literally fulfilled one to boot, cheers my friend .....N
Crystal clear the feeling, the sharpness, the cut of your emotions - loving this piece.
Rosa
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Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

Many thank you's Rosa, your visit & consideration of these words is much appreciated.....Neville
Crystals... interesting natural creation. They are transparent to a degree, and are used for all kinds of things. But they can cast rainbows. So, perhaps the 'Thee' did a favour to him. He can shed colour on all those who are who are seeing him, flaws and all!
Truth t'will out! I think it was she who made the mistake! Loved this poem.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

You may be write, you certainly ain't wrong. Many thanks heading in your direction Great Aunt Astri... read more
Great Aunt Astri

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you, Neville.
The person who put you on the pedestal wants the world to see, and respect her choice of honest and truthful image!


Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

What a splendid perception my friend, I am happy to run with that idea, many thanks indeed...All Goo.. read more
Mrudula Rani

2 Weeks Ago

My pleasure, you have been churning gems my friend. What is your source of inspiration?
Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

Imagination helps and a lot of years...N
yes, an ex lover can do this....put us on a pedestal...then tear us down from it....and blame us when love goes bad....
but they have crystal hearts...and sooner or later they will be broken into pieces--get their just due.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you jacob, always welcome, always appreciated, N

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