Shades of Blue & Green

Shades of Blue & Green

Far away

Across the sea

Just you

Your friend

And part of me

Figurine

And olive tree

Shades of blue and green

 

Searching

For a place to sleep

Joy ride

Through cobbled street

Salt air

And gasoline

Silver sand

And shades of blue and green

 

Marble square

Paella Sea

Holywell a memory

Just you

Your friend

And part of me

A canvas sack

And shades of blue and green

Reviews

[Crowley]

I like the way this rolls off your tongue as you read it. I actually read it a second time out loud because it had such a great quality to how it sounds. Seems like a great day or weekend, just the kind I like. Loved this.

[Neville]

You sir, are very kind indeed and likewise, your visit is much appreciated.... Cheers my friend... Neville

[Lyn Anderson]

A beautiful poem. Romantic, soft, and longing. No bitter. Only blue and green.

[Neville]

Thank you Lyn......so very much appreciated... Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Good morning Neville. I think you want to be that rucksack. A love poem methinks. Mediterranean travels and you are there in spirit if not in flesh. Blue in mood but green and growing in love. What a beautiful poem.

Chris

[Neville]

tis a very old one, like me.. but I thank you for the visit....... N x

[Chris Shaw]

I feel sure you are not nearly as old as you make out to be. It nay be an old poem but I hope it brings you the happiest and earnest of feelings. You deserve that Neville.

Chris

[Chris Shaw]

Oops typos. I meant warmest. My phone misbehaves

[Neville]

ha.. thanks Chris.. age of course is all relative..you know what they say tho, you can't choose ya relative, but ya can choose ya friend.... N

[Chris Shaw]

How true. You've got me smiling through the blues.

[Neville]

...........................me too's :)

[Chris Shaw]

:)) x .................

[Neville]

Hello my friend, am so glad you found these words, they were originally written over 30 years ago.....N

[Mrudula Rani]

Beautiful writings are timeless work of art! always delight the readers. Thanks for sharing.

[Neville]

Hello my friend, am so glad you found these words, they were originally written over 30 years ago.....N

[Mrudula Rani]

Your poems are timeless gems!

[Neville]

Now that is priceless, to me it is and true..... N

[Mrudula Rani]

In shades of blue and green you bring back your memories of travels, Such a lovely images ...olive trees, cobbled stone streets and salty air with gasoline! Loved your poem(s)- All the best

[Neville]

How could I possibly have missed this lovely message from you my dear friend... please accept my very sincere apologies...... Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

Dear Neville , among friends there is never a need for apologies. you know that I am one of your biggest fans. Abraço

[Neville]

bless you M... abraco x

[Mrudula Rani]

Otro ( another , when you send a kiss or hug usually the recipient sends one more to you) obrigada meu querido ( thank you my dear)

[Neville]

thank you ........xxx