Nosey Neighbours

Nosey Neighbours

A Poem by Neville Pettitt
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Not true, coz I got no neighbours.....

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Nosey Neighbours

My wife and I made love in the garden yesterday

It was the first time in a long time we made love

In such a way

 

Unfortunately

It may be the last time for a long time

Despite the fact we both enjoyed each other tremendously

 

The flying insects did not bother us

Nor the pollen or the sunburn

 

Although one particular insect bugged us

Hovering behind a twitching curtain taking photographs

 Of my wife and me



© 2018 Neville Pettitt



Author's Note

Neville Pettitt
Have a laugh on me..............

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This is fun & reminds me of several "neighbor" poems that I've seen here lately (including one of mine recently). We each have something to say about such neighborly relationships, I suppose. I love your round-about way of laying it all out there, even tho you are sufficiently straightforward, for sure! *wink! wink!* Makes for a good balance of subtlety & "in your face"! *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

Thank you so very much Margie, I wondered if you might find these words amusing. All fabricated mind.. read more
Here I was thinking what's with everyone and poems about neighbours being the fav. This season...isit the in thing ...then there I read your poem.. made me laugh... :p



Posted 3 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

Well I'm blooming glad it did my new found literary friend, blooming glad indeed.........All Good Th.. read more
Ardra

3 Months Ago

Blooming glad nice word ... :) same here happily blooming ...smiling :p
Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

Glad you like it. Bloom on my friend....N
Hhaha! well after reading it, I was thinking, it's so good that You actually have no neighbours!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

Yes, I am truly blessed. Thanks for checking in.... Neville
Eek, lol gotta love this. And at the risk of being risqué. Does the threat of nosey neighbors not heighten the fun... oops. Very clever, and I giggled. Oh this line might need a "t", you'll probably know:
"It may be he last time for a long time"

Posted 3 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

Thank you so very much my new found literary friend. You are of course right on all counts......N
Smiling here.....the neighbors could film their own X-rated movie! :) I am sure this would not be a good idea in reality! Cute write. Lydi**

Posted 3 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

Aye, tis entirely made up & no neighbours were hurt in the making. Cheers Lydi**
This was good... but I hope the neighbor doesn't post your love for everyone...

Posted 3 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

Thanks Ghost, I think I'm quite safe on that score....
Ghost

3 Months Ago

Good I don't think the wife would make love again if she seen it on the net
Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

Well I never, so you have been in the same situation too!
Poor neighbor! It had never seen love or lovers in it's life! Ignore the rude insect and do what your heart desires. Please your lady as she wishes! Husbands like you are cherished all over the world!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

You are brilliant! Uma grande abraço.
Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

I do not deserve this pedestal but nevertheless, consider myself blessed. It is good to see that you.. read more
Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

No wonder you are so special for me, you have a way with words !

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