I Know We Both Like Soup

I Know We Both Like Soup

A Poem by Neville Pettitt


Although as yet

We have not met

In the flesh or so to speak

I’m sure I could have fallen

Fallen for you deep

 

Till then though

I shall write for you

No comment springs to mind

Would you ever dare live dangerously

 Or simply be just kind

?


© 2018 Neville Pettitt



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I love the title Neville- awwww:) Soup is a good start I’d say. And then, once slurped- well, who knows?! Very clever, vulnerable, sweet poem with a most poignant last line- would you “simply be just kind..?” Who could possibly resist that line?? Superb and so touching.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

I am truly grateful for your generous consideration of these words Annette, many thanks again......N
You painted the spiritual love in Your own way, the love between two hearts, and the friendship between two minds, there is a tune of gentleness and yearning, a sweet plea flow with Your words, I'm thinking of Your questions, like if she is willing to take the chance with You, be crazy, wild... with all it's unpredictability... or she will keep being as she, and keep being just kind to You, anyway, this is of course sweet lovely little piece :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

They are just words, but nevertheless, you just lit up my day..cheers Light x
Light

3 Months Ago

Haha OK :) welcome of course !
in a world where people connect but seldom meet. This speaks volumes. As always you have created something with character.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

Well ta, ta very much..........Neville
I really enjoyed this. Most people will be able to identify with this in one way or another I think.

It gave me a slight melancholic feeling. But ended hopeful enough.



Posted 3 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

Cheers JohnsDavidburg, much appreciated, I can tell ya..........All Good Things, Neville
hmm... this one feels like a poem, but more of an in your face challenge, lol. Nevertheless a lovely write to a special lady of yours. Cheers!!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

Thank you Karen for stopping a while to consider these words of mine. I'm glad it feels like a poem,.. read more
living too dangerously can land you in thick soup... moderation in all things Neville , and a kind heart usually is a winner :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

You are of course, absolutely right dear Stella. Thank you so much for checking in & the sage advice.. read more
love the title...we both would like the same appetizer...which is a good indication for the main entree...
we might really taste well together...and have great dessert.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

Now wouldn't that be just great eh jacob! Cheers....Neville
" Simply be just kind " seems like an elegant way to be. When we are not familiar with some one. Just liking soup shows we have similar tastes in food to some extent... I always wonder what inspires you to write these thought provoking gems?

Posted 3 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

I wonder too my dear friend, maybe it's...............N
Mrudula Rani

3 Months Ago

Please keep wondering and producing these marvelous works of yours, they are a joy to read.
I like this one ... :)

Meeting to share soup heheh :))

Posted 3 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

That was the general idea, cheers my friend....Neville
Ardra

3 Months Ago

Like chicken soup for soul... sharing souls... :)
I love the flow of your words... Good write thank you for sharing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

Thank you for checking em out Ghost, tis appreciated, just you mark my words.....N

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