No Pillow Required

These words are meant to whisper... Your shout, so over to you...........N...o...

No Pillow Required

 

I want to write words

to make you want me

as much as I want you

I want to scribe them

on the walls of

magnificent cathedrals

and courtyards too

for the whole word

to touch taste and see

 

Then and only then

I want to paint you

in the reflection

of tall mirrors and

to trace those circles

with your fingers

chasing mine

across your belly

to begin with

and where no pillow

on such an occasion

is required….....

Author's Note

There is a point somewhere along the pleasure pain continuum where the two become exquisitely blurred... so come on, make my day be brutal with me...... Neville

Reviews

[Norman 223]

Strangely enough, my wife and I were never "romantic" in this sensuous way We laughed a lot, shared many interests, and 53 years later are still married and kidding each other.
Where did we go wrong??? It's ruined my ability to write tender love poems, such as this. Neville........:-)

Norm. the Phillistine,

[Neville]

Never, you are Norman223 The Conqueror .... cheers my dear friend.... N

[Neville]

Oh' and that is some record to be very, very proud of indeed sir.....

[Alexa Apothic Red]

Oh, this is so great! I have experienced this same longing as a writer... as if I could write the perfect words to make the object of my affection want me in the same way I want them... I love how you wanted to scribe them up there alongside the majesty of grand cathedral walls... such epic romance... and I am enthralled with it! Excellent words choices, descriptions and clever phrases.

[Neville]

Hey Alexa, you are far too generous, but I am truly grateful for the visit and appreciate your time... All Good Things, Neville

[Alexa Apothic Red]

you're so welcome... feel free to read any of my writing as well.. :)

[barleygirl]

Your special brand of seduction is like no other! I agree that pillowy soft romance can be a snore. I love me some devilish taunting to spice up an otherwise predictable allure. This is the very notion of spiking a fresh twist to so many blasé poems blathering on & on about "love." Please stop by sometime for a playful spanking and we'll forget about all the comforts . . . *mmmmm* Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

Am on my way Margie, left or write at the Boondocks....see ya in a tickle......Cheers, Neville

[barleygirl]

Thanks for smiles to last all week *smile*

[Neville]

..........x

[Hebe]

Hi Neville... this is impressive, it evokes passion and surrender .....i got goosebumps reading this ....sometimes it's worth taking the risk! Superb!

[Neville]

That is so very kind of you Hebe... I believe we might possibly share similar perspectives.... in my book, there is too much emphasis on the negative value of risk and not enough on the possible positive outcomes...... Neville..

[Hebe]

Yes definitely :) what is life without risk.. ..fear paralysis the soul !

[Neville]

Blooming heck, I was just going to say the very same thing.... I truly was......how weird is that.....N

[Hebe]

Unbelievable ............... i believe energy can travel across the oceans!

[Neville]

anywhere............

[Cherrie Palmer]

Everyone wants to be wanted and hear the secrets of the soul whispered in our ears and for that a pillow is not required.
Excellent creatation

[Neville]

Many thank you's indeed Cherrie..........Neville

[Ghost]

This is a nice way of wanting honor someone who you love, to want to make them live for ever within an artistry... Nice write my friend thank you for sharing

[Neville]

Thank you Ghost what a lovely thought you have gifted to me here...........N

[sette]

creatively written and expressed.. i just can imagine one shouting his great love for a person in the middle of the tallest and biggest cathedral but sometimes it can only be an illusion, because sometimes unspoken love creates big volumes than expressive love.

[Neville]

My word, thank you sette, thank you very much indeed.......Neville

[sette]

no problem

[lightsong]

Wonderful my friend! and uniquely done, of course I can see Your own touch "spotted on" on Your last lines. sometimes You want to scream to the whole world of You love, when this powerful feeling sweep through You and wanting to go free... I say, paint on my friend, on each wall and in everyplace You can, with or without a pillow :)

[Neville]

Thank you Light... We can but try eh'............Neville

[Einstein Noodle]

hmmmmmmmmmmm beautiful loves' desire ... so many reflections zip past me minds eye ...young loves, middle loves and old loves ..the excitement of wanting and hoping ..it is exquisite in its pain isn't it!?
E.

[Neville]

Too darn write it is my friend, too darn write for sure and it ain't fair, but and it's a big BUT, it is part of life.............N

[Einstein Noodle]

;) yep! ............