Babies Don’t Bounce

There is no such thing as a bouncing baby, if you try, they break.. those that try disgust me....

Babies Don’t Bounce

 

Babies don’t bounce

Bullace are blue

Babies don’t bounce

Bruises are too

Babies don’t bounce

Brute that you are

Babies don’t bounce

 

 

Reviews

[angel]

I don't want to know how you came to this realization, my friend...(averts eyes and walks away, whistling)

[Neville]

then I shall keep shtum... but thanks for the visit... N

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Amen to this...this kind of abuse is the worse sin...
j.

[Crowley]

This really hits a nerve, and I am in full agreement about the disgust. Great point and great point of view,

[Neville]

thank you sir.... your visit is much appreciated.... N

[Stella Armour]

Those who bounce babies usually think women bounce too....bullies in the greatest degree need to be locked up in solitary confinement for life ( with the occasional boot put in for good measure.

[Neville]

thank you for checking in Stella.... if the boot fits....N x

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Exactly...a bounce for a bounce!

[Neville]

bootifully articulated..... N

[Ms Paragon]

Short and to the point.Feels like a punch in the stomach to think of the monsters out there.Well written and strong message.

[Neville]

thank you so much... yes I felt it just needed to be said, rather than just kept in my head......Neville

[Ms Paragon]

Indeed, some things are too important to keep silent about,and you're welcome!

[Neville]

I thank you again.... N

[emmajoy]

Your brief words prove that poetry isn't all sweet scented roses round the porch but - a way of standing up to the stench of evil in society. B for brilliant, Neville.

[Neville]

thank you my friend..... am delighted you alighted.... Neville

[emmajoy]

Sunday is a day to remove head from sand and all else and - remember what matters..

[Neville]

thanks again..

[Doug Jenkins]

Pithy, and to the point! Well done! My only suggestion would be that the "you" of L6 be changed to a "B" word in keeping with the rest of the lines, perhaps, "Brute", as is "Brute animal you".

[Neville]

Hey many thank you's..much appreciated... will seriously consider your suggestion when I wake up more fully..... N

[Neville]

having had time to consider.. these words have been tweaked... many thanks Doug.. will visit your pages soon my friend am having trouble with my PC and this site.... All Good Things, Neville

[Peach]

It's almost terrifying that this could be read in the pentameter of a nursery rhyme. When read and reread, and reread it brings to my mind that "YOU'LL FLOAT TOO" type of repetition. Getting louder and louder. Very unsettling and well executed.

[Neville]

I am truly grateful for your time and consideration of these words of mine.... Bless ya..... Neville

[Cherrie Palmer]

Nanna's don't bounce either.

[Neville]

you are of course correct...... N

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Aberrations, abominations, “Babies don’t bounce.”- what else is there to say? This is written in language even monsters can understand. I hope. Well-done Neville.

[Neville]

I hope so too ..... x