Edeline

Edeline

A Poem by Neville

Edeline

 

The young French maid

In her Cossack hat

Looked so fine if not divine

She can walk my dog

Anytime

 

Just teasing

.

 

 

© 2018 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
a tease is as good as a jest....

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You are on a roll these days it seems. Now I’ll be drooling all day over your irresistible doggie, that one special wienie I wish I could get my leash on! I’d take your canine on a stroll like it’s never been on! *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

Is that a promise.... bless ya Margie... nug, nug.... N x
from the name I knew it should be a French girl, and what's more naughty than a short teasing French poem? but are You sure she can do anything You want :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

No not sure, for sure not sure.. if she could fix my car and build me a barn, I would be more sure, .. read more
lightsong

5 Years Ago

hhhaa my friend, she must be a Supper Woman then ;)

Bless You too.
Neville

5 Years Ago

..........x
A wonderful flow of words. Make me smile this late night. Thank you Neville for sharing the amazing poetry.
' Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

If I can but make you smile, then I am complete... sleep well my good friend and poet..... N
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Good night and have fun/be safe.
Neville

5 Years Ago

my zz's are safe...bless ya... fun & safety are maybe incompatible... will let you know.. N
what a fascinating and beautiful name

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

I am inclined to agree...
Edeline what a lovely name. This is very visual Neville. She looks so chic walking your dog. My autocorrect, just substituted eyeliner for Edeline.

Chris


Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

eyeliner is good...........
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

It is. Wouldn't be without mine.
Neville

5 Years Ago

what's mine is your's .....
Your dog is very lucky. It has a very kind master, who can appoint a French maid to take it for walks.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

she is indeed...... N

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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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