What Do You Have There

My infatuation with mirrors is reflected in these words... why not take a look....

What Do You Have There

 

Pray

What do you

Hold there

In the palm

Of your hand

 

Why

It is you

My true love

Can you not see

 

Look

Here and there

We are surrounded

By a bank

Of tall mirrors

 

It is you

My own true love

You upon you

Upon you

Upon me

 

Reflected

Here and there

Forever and ever

To infinity

 

Yes

Tis you

That I clutch

In the palm

Of my hand

 

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

What a cool write this is! Mirrors....what they reflect is truly in the eyes of the beholder! Lydi**

[Neville]

Thank you dear Lydi** and a big one at that...... Neville

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I always find it odd when people say.. cant you see how much I love you? For me personally, I think Im blind. I need to feel things, be washed within them, know them, before I can ever "see" them. Maybe it's just this crazy darkness I own. Anyhoo, I do love love and therefore am glad to have read this! Thank you for sharing.

[Neville]

It seems we share more than poetry... I am glad you read these words too...and I thank you truly.... Neville

[Chris Shaw]

This is a love poem. The imagery showing reflections of two people in conversation. This is a poem of reassurance of everlasting love to one who maybe doubts. It is beautiful. Good morning Neville.

[Neville]

Good Morning Chris.....and thank you my dear friend... Neville

[Chris Shaw]

Have a lovely day Neville.

[Neville]

You too Chris............Neville

[Lyn Anderson]

There is a melancholy to this, for me, that the speaker perhaps feels the other does not always know that they have them forever, come what may

[Neville]

One never knows for sure though, does one... nevertheless, I do like your take on these words, and I truly thank you for considering them...... Neville

[sette]

i like the word infinity which means forever though the skeptic in me doesn't believe in forever but then a lot of people do so i just respect it and anyway eternal love poems are interesting read so be it...

[Neville]

thank you dear friend, you are most kind... I like the word cauliflower (lol)...........Neville x