Mocku

Mocku

A Poem by Neville Pettitt
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Nowhere near a haiku, or a senryu. Almost a faiku tho, but not quite....

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Moku

 

Sooner or later

The pen shall better the sword

While liars run away and voyeurs all applaud

 

 


© 2018 Neville Pettitt



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Neville Pettitt
tricky little variant.....

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what a perfect world it will become.. hail hail hail

Posted 2 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

2 Months Ago

It most certainly would.. thank you sette.... N
I'm thinking that Your "moku" would be a beautiful Japanese name! if not used before. now let me make it clear in my head, it seems that not the word or the pen works, then what will be working? any idea for a next faiku?

Posted 2 Months Ago


Light

2 Months Ago

tell me when You do so I won't miss it.
Neville Pettitt

2 Months Ago

I have a feeling you won't miss it...
Light

2 Months Ago

good... :)
The pen has always been mightier than the sword Neville. That's why I have so much time for writers. Have a happy evening.

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

2 Months Ago

Thank you Chris & the very same to you..... Neville
T'is a nice little thing you've come up with here. And yes, it shall, and hopefully sooner rather than later

Posted 2 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

2 Months Ago

Here, here & so slay all of us....we also say thank you and mean it... N
a good kind of voyeur here...the one who watches others' written works come to form and come to theme.

and i feel the pen has always been mightier...because mental mite smites physical...when it comes down to it.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

2 Months Ago

The reason I write is because I can no longer run, punch, kick or hide.....thank you sir for checkin.. read more
You never cease to inspire us with masterful poems and words of wisdom. I think Andrew Mitchell might envy you. Pen is mightier than the sword, spirit is mighteir that all weapons and hope is mightier than all storms.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

2 Months Ago

your encouraging words are a poem in their own write..........but I do so thank you for them... N
Sami Khalil

2 Months Ago

You are very welcome...
There is such a dark playfulness in your words that makes each line come alive in a world of its own. I look forward to that day.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

2 Months Ago

Don't we all my fine literary friend.. and many thank you's wing their way t'ward thee... N
An owl on the moon

2 Months Ago

Wishing you endless inspirations today... and every day. C
Neville Pettitt

2 Months Ago

Cheers Craig & back at ya.....
Your stabbing wit needs no package or parameter. You could just hang your satire out there for all to enjoy (& wince) . . . by line 2, we've forgotten to note poetic form becuz your words ring so true (((NUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

2 Months Ago

Hey Margie.. this old guy just can't thank you enough.. I hope you know that... He want's to but his.. read more
barleygirl

2 Months Ago

Good one! Goes down hot & smooth just like my Bailey's Irish Cream in strong coffee! *smile*
Neville Pettitt

2 Months Ago

Just the way I Like it, strong that is...
Your pen has always been better than the sword...it writes happiness, beauty, love, and life... it remembers...the sword is just nice to look at and to handle.;p

Posted 2 Months Ago


Neville Pettitt

2 Months Ago

You are far too generous for words my friend but I thank you with them regardless...... Neville

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