Versal Law

and now for something a bit different, 'versal' being my very newest neologism... no prizes for guessing.....

Versal Law

 

You whisper soft

And 

Your words

Become lessons

You write words

And

They become law…

As

We make love

Our

Bodies merge

As one 

With heaven

Tis a perfectly 

Natural versal law…….

 

Author's Note

bring it on...........

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the poem of each other's bodies...not spoken aloud, but with movement of the predicates of love.
j.

[Neville]

a poemed response to put a smile on this old fella's face for sure... thank you Jacob

N.

[Fay Slimm]

A heavenly feeling indeed when two become a virtual one - and I agree that tho' through distance versal law has to do the mingling of merging is not to be missed. Gentle erotica as only you can effectively get across on ami.....................x

[Neville]

Thank you dear Fay, many thanks indeed :)

[Fay Slimm]

My pleasure as ever to " bring it on" - big smiles from me basking in a perfectly lovely evening sun and thinking of re-enacting that sensuous versal law ! ...........x

[Neville]

then I feel obliged to thank thee again :)

[emmajoy]

You should be a diplomat, sir.. you know how to please people when it comes to wise and highly acceptable words! Such truth .. Versal reality?!

[Neville]

You are far too kind emmajoy, and I am, as always truly grateful :)

[emmajoy]

Not entirely intended as kind, Neville, but, true

[Neville]

then you are more than most kind.. and true :)

[emmajoy]

Laughing here, is this the SW Admisoc ?

[Neville]

............…. the wot?

[emmajoy]

Having a Magnum, need to focus. Ne'er mind. :)

[Ana Papaya]

aww versal, as in poetic verse?
certainly love itself and all it's action and displays are poetic verses waiting to be born.
i like this very loving and tender piece of poetry.

[Neville]

Many thank you's are on their way my friend :)

[Ana Papaya]

Received and you are welcome!

[AJNJ]

Needs that very special kind of tuning to merge so seamlessly with another. But when it happens it’s indeed a perfectly natural versal law! Beautifully penned sir!

[Neville]

thank you kindly and true Pestonjee, a much appreciated visit :)

[AJNJ]

Always a pleasure :)

[Ardra]

They can be addictive too the words whispered sweetly and then we need to find rehabilitation centre for that heheh a hard work...
But this one surely is favoured by all the ladies..
I think without doubt....
:))

[Neville]

You are indeed very kind dear lady....... neville

[Gee]

To find the right woman, now there's the hitch. If her found this poem is oh so relatable.( I'm lucky I did )
Morning Neville, hope all is well in Bulgaria(??)

[Neville]

Hiya Gee.. hope you pair are okay.. are you still in Turkey?.... Yes we are still in Bulgaria, tis bloomin warm I can tell ya...... Thanks for the visit much appreciated as always.... N x

[Gee]

Aye, back home. Wet and chilly. Hope you've packed a sweater for the return trip :)

[Neville]

damnation.... no I haven't ..

[Gee]

I'm on it, I'll knit one, cable style, and post it tomorrow, what size, slim fit medium ???

[Neville]

Extra extra large x

[Gee]

Same as my boxers :))))

[Neville]

Nah, much bigger

[sette]

i am just amazed at this writing that love can really be wonderful. really expressive and magical words

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful poetry Neville, no guessing, just beautiful lines.

Chris

[Neville]

Cheers.. night night & sleep tight Chris... N

[Chris Shaw]

You too Neville :))

[Fran Marie]

A beautifully versed poem so well penned ..sounds perfectly lovely

[Neville]

and you are far too kind, but nevertheless, so very much appreciated...... Neville