Deceit

Deceit

A Poem by Neville
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A good example of a faikhu.....

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Deceit

 

Though initially discreet

Your indecent lust and passion

Fueled by foul deceit

 

 

© 2018 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
it just came to me as she ran away from me...

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'Deceit'
Neville PAetitt,
Some things are never meant to last. This message was one of those......you penned it and simply told the truth. See and say something for it's true nature. Unfortunately a relationship which is based on lust' and fueled by deceit' will be a shallow sandy bowl unable to hold healthy waters. Good job.
Kathy

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

Hey Kathy dear friend, many thanks for visiting and considering these few words, your well reasoned .. read more



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Well, if she did run away from you, you should be thanking your guardian angel for such providence. What a stark but telling senryu. Deceit is a wretched thing, can appear as corsetting in the beginning but the one duped can be really taken for a ride.

Good stuff, Neville!
Best,
M.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you my friend.. N
'Deceit'
Neville PAetitt,
Some things are never meant to last. This message was one of those......you penned it and simply told the truth. See and say something for it's true nature. Unfortunately a relationship which is based on lust' and fueled by deceit' will be a shallow sandy bowl unable to hold healthy waters. Good job.
Kathy

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

Hey Kathy dear friend, many thanks for visiting and considering these few words, your well reasoned .. read more
so much pain in the poem very much transparent feelings

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

well there ya go.. look hard and you will see write through me...... cheers.. N
Probably scared her off with yer headlessness...if she'd hung around, she'd have found out you're a lovely man, despite it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

to spite it more like.. cheers angel.. and has anyone ever told ya you are looking more like Mr. J.W.. read more
angel

5 Years Ago

I know he was a handsome man, but as a woman....eccchh.Thanks a heap, no head.
Hahaha! Faikhu!!! Good one!

As to the actual deceit, her loss. Hope he has half the brain and the heart that you have. :):)

V

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

Wotch ya language now missus.. ta so much V you visiting this page is much appreciated.. Havin a lar.. read more
Verse

5 Years Ago

Hahaha! My mum would be so ashamed of my word choices right now... :)

My pleasure, N.. read more
Neville

5 Years Ago

I wont tell her if you dont.....
You know what happens when you lie down with pigs . . . or was that dogs? Ah yes, the filthy squandering mess of bad intentions. So nice to finally be too old for all that! *wink! wink!* fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

Yuck, me too.. standing up with them tho is even more risky, coz ya can very easily trip over summat.. read more
I'll be dumb enough to admit I actually googled what a faikhu is...lol. But really, does that stand for a 'fucked up haiku'? hahah jk ;P
Your content is too powerful to really notice the form you wrote this in. Someone once told me that love doesn't exist without a little bit of lust on both sides..but deceit, oh well, I think that depends on who one is fooling, the other one or themselves...
Great write, N. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

You have just taken the words out of my mouth my dear friend.. that is precisely what a faikhu is.. .. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

5 Years Ago

Ah, as a person whose main language ain't English, google is a blessing :D
A pleasure always.. read more
Neville

5 Years Ago

Then I consider myself truly blessed & thank you again..... Neville
From the prospective of a secret lover, discreet and deceit can make good bed partners. From the one being cheeted on it sucks. This is one of the best fuckhu's I've come across. Leaves a bitter taste though don't it?

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

Well faiku Chris faikhu very much indeed.... to be honest, these words were once upon a time very re.. read more
nice faikhu my friend :))))))))))))))))))))))) hmmmmmm discreet deceit .... just not a close pair are they .. sure to blister in the fires of passion ... nasty ouchie says i!
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

faikhu again and reciprocated best wishes for this fair mane!.... N
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

laughing out loud my friend ..fainks!
Neville

5 Years Ago

then laugh out loud quietly sir.. think of the neighbours.. tis Sunday after all.... Best.. N
This packs a punch, Neville! Lust and deceit cannot remains under wraps for long. Hell follows.

Posted 5 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

It caught up with me but thankfully, blew over so long ago now I can hardly remember what she tasted.. read more
DIVYA

5 Years Ago

Thankfully, the bitterness always mellows with time. I wonder about that tiny patch of numbness it l.. read more
Neville

5 Years Ago

Ah' those hidden bruises.. tell me, I got loads... sunshine appreciated & true..... Neville

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