Hot & Cold

Hot & Cold

A Poem by Neville
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ego's up, she goes down, ego's down, she goes off on one.....

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Hot & Cold

 

She blows

Hot and cold

And

Cold and hot

She

Can’t make up

Her mind

But

She changes

It a lot

They say

Don’t they

It

Came to pass

Well

Mark my words

That

Is such a blooming

Laugh

In the end

It came

To absolutely

Nothing…

 

 

 

© 2018 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
ignore grammar if ya must but ignore grandpa at ya peril..... N

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Actually after reading this I tried to introspect myself if i am also like this..I am also having mood swings but i guess those can be beared...I don't actually know..Actually this thing is a characteristic of females and i feel that male population should accept it..I loved this poem and the way it described it...Great work..
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing..
Riddhi



Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

You are very kind.. and I thank you Riddhi.... Neville
This could be me starting my day.
Ok, let's just go back to bed, start again tomorrow.


Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

How very kind of you Paul, I will pass on that tho if you dont mind....a much appreciated visit sir... read more
Mmmm i know my moods are like going on a roller coaster ride... lol
So this poems seems to speak all of us ladies who has been there and had no control over it...but yes it's hard for the guys to keep track but to expect we have a neutral behaviour is asking too much of us... ;)
We can't change the way our emotions create havoc in our blood....if it was upto us we would be the sweetest things earth would have created hehhe.... :)
So better keep calm and survive ...that's what I would tell the male population....:p

Posted 5 Years Ago


Ardra

5 Years Ago

Lol.... words perhaps.... the only good thing we are good at casting... :)
Ardra

5 Years Ago

But I like how your mind works...very amusing one...:))
Neville

5 Years Ago

thanks again... N
they say that women are really fickle and that is so true

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

I wouldn't know... but thanks for the tip.. I will watch out.... Neville
I will forgive you for posting a poem about my fluctuating moods & bipolar issues! *wink! wink!* One of the many reasons I never got married is becuz men expected me to be on a more even keel . . . sometimes not an option!!! *smile* Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

Even keels are for boats & boats only... thank you Margie & truly meant.... Neville
You don't really know where you stand with those who blow hot and cold air on a whim. You certainly have to keep your wits about you. Say the wrong thing and you'll know it. Fickle by nature springs to mind. Good early evening Neville.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

Your telling me.. Thanks Chris...... Neville x
Fickle is what fickle does.
The vacillating mind doesn't always win in its quest for the touchstone.

Nicely done.

Cheers,
M.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

My word.. I have not heard that old saying in a long time, a very long time indeed..... Many thanks .. read more
lol I hope You are not only speaking of us women and our swinging moods, I know it's not easy to be with someone who strongly has it, but maybe You men might try it sometimes and we will see how it will be and how You will deal with it ;) still no matter what, I must admit that this poem is brilliant.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

Would I ever.... no not at all my friend & I appreciate you popping in... am also glad to see you ba.. read more
i like the sardonic touch to this one.
i have been with women like this...changing on a whim...changing like a fall breeze from south to north.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Neville

5 Years Ago

Was one of them called.... nah, never mind.. Bless you jacob my friend........... Neville

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Added on September 18, 2018
Last Updated on September 23, 2018

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Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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