A Season Shaping Words

A Season Shaping Words

 

I can wait no longer

Summers past

Shrug a shoulder darling

Nothing’s built to last

 

If I could but shape

Words tho

That mean anything

At all

 

You would be

There somewhere

Come winter spring

And fall….......... x

 

Author's Note

Hi....am ending on a high note...

Reviews

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

If I could pick my favourite line here it would be, “Nothing’s built to last” On spot and how real can we get! Words are words are just words and yet they do last on paper forever (or at least for a long time to come) Then, there will always be those people who will figure in them somewhere in summer rain or winter squall. They were built to last.

Appreciated much, dear N

KittyKat

[Neville]

I wonder if as much as your visit.. I doubt it.. A great big thank you on its way.. N

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Thank you N! I love thank yous. Especially, big ones from happy poets!

[Neville]

then we are both happy bunnies.. oops sorry kittens..

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Haha. I like bunnies. The kind that play in the grass 😹

[Neville]

yep.. those kind of kittens..

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

:) yep....!

[Neville]

............... :)

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

:)))))))) )))

[Neville]

that's one helluva smile;)

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

A cat smiles like that when she’s on to something, N. 😹😹😹!

[Neville]

it was not me, honest.. I'm innocent, maybe.. N

[Lorry]

A bittersweet symphony of acceptance, liberally sprinkled with regret at what was not meant to be. I'm sure this is a tune that most, if not all would recognise Neville.

[Neville]

bittersweet will do for me my friend, many thanks and true...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

As someone who struggles too often with expressing myself in terms of words, I highly relate to this. ..'nothing's built to last' but oh, we still keep hoping, don't we? ...
Lovely flow here, Neville.

[Neville]

Bless ya my friend and bloomin true... I say nowt wrong in the way you express yourself neither.. you have a very cute smile up there too.. just sayin..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

hah that's my monkey face for those who think I'm wayy too serious lool thank you, N ;) :P

[Neville]

I still think it's cute..

[Melissa Murray]

...for some reason this one breaks my heart, but then you sprinkle a little hope on it...I really appreciate your brief style, it's refreshing. Also, why do poignant feelings always come with warnings? and harbingers of doubt? Goodbye Thomas Hardy, goodbye Poe, goodbye punishing poets of the past, and those who delight in torturing hearts... and those others desperate to condemn what can easily be turned around....with a little endurance or imagination or commitment? Luv yer poems-all 'em. Cheers, Melissa

[Neville]

what a wonderful thing to say my friend, thanks is hardly adequate, but I say it anyway.. All Good Things, Melissa, ... Neville

[Eva Bielby]

Short, simple words....but packed with emotions left unsaid. So much from so few words. Clever. ☺

[Neville]

Thank you Eva.. thank you very much indeed.. Have a great Saturday.. N

[lightsong]

You say it all, Your own way, how to love her, how You love her, and how You will keep loving her. such a very lovely poem, deep... for those who can grasp the beautiful meaning behind Your touching words.

[Neville]

You always say the nicest words.. thank you my dear friend... N

[lightsong]

You deserve them all.....

[Neville]

I gotta stop blushing coz I have to go out soon...

[angel]

Oh, how sweet! And quite romantic.
'Tis a lucky woman who inspired this!
Just lovely, my friend.

[Neville]

loadsa thanks blown in your direction and meant just for you...

[Ana Papaya]

This is a delightfully romantic little poem.

[Neville]

hey.. sorry, I almost missed ya call...have been a bit preoccupied.. many thank you's my friend.... N

[Ana Papaya]

will i'm happy you finally answered :)
no worries. I am not keeping score. (:

[Neville]

Phew, that's a relief..

[Chris Shaw]

A high note indeed for someone. A hope that will last longer than a season of shaping words in summer. Winter has always been chilly. Wouldn't it be nice to have warm winters too. Romantic Neville. Lucky is the woman who has netted you.

Chris

[Neville]

Just words Chris, but ta very much for the compliment...

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I was thinkin' of headin' down to the local pub and endin' it with a high ball...but whatever suits your fancy Nev.

[Neville]

make mine a single malt..