Going Blind

Going Blind

A Poem by Neville
"

a work in progress.. nothing to worry about

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Going Blind

 

Although

Going blind

Ahead

Of his time

I note

His world

Switched off

All colour

Just before

He went

Out of

His mind

.

 

 

 

© 2018 Neville


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Neville
blink and its gone they said...

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Life is like that. The brightest lights burn out too soon- I am reminded of people I love, who struggle with physical and emotional trials that are hard to comprehend when one's mind and sight are two of life's most prized possessions - that can be stolen away but any number of accidents or illnesses

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

You are quite write of course, thank you for checking in Ms. Anderson.. much appreciated as always.... read more



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why I'm feeling this is about Mr.Trump (don't tell anybody I said so LOL). to be mind-blinded is the worst, and I think in one way or another their world will be going insane from within until out, ruining what it can be ruined.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

money can't buy you love... can it.. bless ya my friend, thanks a billion..
i think the lights inside go out way before the ones on the outside.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Neville

5 Years Ago

I know for a fact, cheers sir and Seasons Greetings...
Are we playing find the mind? lol Mine has been hallucinating all day! I'm singing one minute...asleep the next....blink and Im back to that colorless pain

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Neville

5 Years Ago

welcome to my corner of the cave... :)
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Gee
I wonder how long the mind retains images before needing them refreshed. Couldn't imagine living in a world without sight, guess it must be much, much easier being born blind as you'd not know the beauty being missed.
Good early evening Neville, hope all is well with you :)


Posted 5 Years Ago


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Neville

5 Years Ago

Good early evening back at you Gee.. thanks for taking a peek and truly meant.. hope all is good wit.. read more
Loss of sight is probably what I fear most. A world without colour comes as a result of many illnesses or even accidents. I have often thought that someone born blind doesn't know anything else, so will just deal with it. Someone who has had sight and then loses it, would suffer a great loss. Then there's losing your mind, another huge loss. I hope if I ever lose my mind, I lose it completely and I remain content in my new world. Thought provoking. How do you describe colour to a person who has. never had sight at all. I don't know why but meditation came through strongly in your lines. Maybe a way of dealing with this would be through meditation.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you for visiting and thinking about these words of mine our Chris.. I have a problem with my l.. read more
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Ah, so the meditation I was picking up on was there? It suddenly came through so strongly, right at .. read more
Neville

5 Years Ago

you are one very astute friend and poet our Chris, and yes it sure is... N x
Life is like that. The brightest lights burn out too soon- I am reminded of people I love, who struggle with physical and emotional trials that are hard to comprehend when one's mind and sight are two of life's most prized possessions - that can be stolen away but any number of accidents or illnesses

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

You are quite write of course, thank you for checking in Ms. Anderson.. much appreciated as always.... read more

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