Upon Her Ears

twas thought not said as he slipped outa bed...

Upon Her Ears

 

At the very same time he brushed aside

That single strand of her night wilden hair

He whispered soft through grey flecked beard

 

Then

 

Blew these words upon her ears

Have no fear my love for now although

I let you go I shall return and love thee even more so

 

 

Author's Note

writ between my breakfast porridge and my Yorkshire pud this fair winters mane... does nothing for my hunger tho......

Reviews

[Lorry]

Ahh, would it be wrong of me to start by saying that a Sunday isn't a Sunday without Yorkshire pud, roast beef in gravy, carrots and baby trees. Well, that's what I call 'em anyway. :)
Beautifully writen Sir. It sounds similar to my love for my bed, although the pillows are mostly hair free.

[Neville]

you make me hungry all over, you rascal you.... that's what we call em too, so we do... Bless ya Lorry.. Neville

[Ken Simm.]

Have you been looking in my diary?
You romantic devil you. Only you could bring erogenous zones and Yorkshire pud together. Onion gravy anyone?

[Neville]

Ah' .. the trilogy you refer to just made me salivate into my bowl of pomegranate seeds... Now I can't share them, can I .. so thanks for that too sir..

[Samuel Dickens]

Ah, but it must have had some satiating effect, methinks. He left before breakfast--will this fellow be back for supper? So few clues for my curious, romantic mind to wrestle with.

[Neville]

bless you my friend... I do so enjoy your visits... and thank you bigly in both advance and in anticipation of a sequel...….. Stay well Sam and safe... Neville

[Unspoken poet]

this is such a wonderful poem here, nicely said

[Neville]

thank you kindly my friend and please accept my apologies for the late response :)

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Woah woww a fabulous sensational romantic poem, I like the poetic visuals how you relate the poetic saga , in a novel eloquent style. Kudos.

Plz Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too, right on top of my page.

[Tania Mo]

Is this how we give shallow reviews and scout around for reviews on this cafe??? 🤔

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Hmm lmao, are you jealous or something? My reviews are deep and show how well I grasp the wonder and beauty of a poem, so stop trolling us newbie , and give better reviews if you can. We are a community that like to exchange views and if I don't ask people forget to return the reviews, everyone likes to hear from fellow poets and when one is not famous you have to try to get read in the sea of poetry. But you seem to have a mean hating heart gah.

[Tania Mo]

But you don't have to copy and paste the same lines to every one. It looks
fake?

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Hey ho I just found out you are trolling, and you are not really Tania, you must be with a fake id, you must be like the Indian guy who was trolling and putting people down on this site before. Poetess aurora here complained of people your type.

There's nothing fake in asking for comments.

[Tania Mo]

But it looks so artificial

[AJNJ]

Your words have much beauty and promise! Letting go paves the way for return with an even deeper love sometimes. When the love is irreplacable. Great poem sir!

[Neville]

thank you kindly my friend, much appreciate & always welcome :)

[AJNJ]

It was a pleasure reading this poem :)

[Hayllie]

You always write these shorter writes so masterfully, such emotion in your writing and it always draws you in to read more and more.

[Neville]

thank you kindly my friend, what a lovely thing to say...
Neville :)

[Hayllie]

you so welcome!

[brokenwriter]

short but really beautiful :)

[Neville]

a bit like me then.... thank you so very much my friend.. and much appreciated too.. All Good Things, Neville

[kitty]

In jest is this a promise that could be a comfort to the proverbial fool or are you making assurances sure? Proof in the pudding???

[Neville]

thank you for considering these words my friend... tis true, I wrote this scribble in-between my porridge and my lunch for someone a little bit special..... :)

[kitty]

Lucky that 'special' someone to have someone with the ability to make them smile! Keep posting happy words!

[Neville]

happy words are not always the easiest thing to find, ,but I shall try.. I seem to have dried up... it happens tho :)

[kitty]

Surely you dont consider yourself a prune! Just chase your Muse around the room a couple of times!

[Neville]

been there, done that, and on me second T shirt..nowt helps, just got to give it time so please be gentle with me..

[kitty]

"Gentle" is my middle name dear man!

[Neville]

........:)

[barleygirl]

Despite being quite brief, your poem conjures up an amazing scenario of nostalgia in me. I'm reminded of those times when I would be sleeping beside a perfectly adored love-of-my-life, yet something else always beckoned to my wild spirit . . . I tried to imagine my wanderings would not take away from this homestead bed. The bittersweet curse of wanderlust (((NUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

I'm pretty much sure I Know what you mean Margie.. bless ya :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The feel of the ancient writer "Donne". Love missed, love touched. Places where lover's dance and engrave memories of kindness shared. Wonderful use of words. Made me write my friend. Thank you Neville for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Neville]

Yeah.. so good to hear bless you Johnnie C.. I must visit and get my fix quite soon.. N

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend. Have fun and be safe.

[Neville]

you too Coyote.. and go well..