A Handful of Ghosts

A Handful of Ghosts

A Poem by Neville
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A Handful of Ghosts

 

It was while

Sharing your

Bed with

A handful of

Ghosts

I was forced

To conclude

There was just

Never enough

Room

There for me

 

So as I bring

You your tea

And a handful

Absolutes

Plus a few

Home truths

Each one

Of them painted

In delicious

Black and white

 

I leave them

Here for you

To digest

At your leisure

Any time of

Day or night

And remember

Whatever

Else you do

Keep my number


© 2019 Neville


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Sounds like an ultimatum to me. The ghosts need to go. Those home truths, no grey areas, it's all in black and white and yet, you graciously make the tea and make sure she's got your number. That means the door remains open. What we do for love eh Neville?Much to contemplate between the lines. The ghosts have to be former lovers I reckon.

Chris


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

Bless ya Chris there's a lot of residual in and around St......d Rd Northants N



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Wow, some ghosts stay and they haunt us, nicely said

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


thank you kindly my new friend and true
Home truths are best kept at a distance, dear sir. You'd be surprised how many eyes peer into the reason for words.. too many hours in the day, perhaps. Maybe long walks, lateral thinking or discussing the matter between the sheets of your reading is a prompt. Who knows. As ever, a slightly tongue in the cheek piece of your extraordinary psyche !

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


I take it that's a yes or a no then :)
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emmajoy

3 Years Ago

either, both, one or other,
Too many ghosts get in the way of a good thing Neville. Just phone ghostbusters and get back in those sheets and show her what she's missing... Which should mainly be about having less bloody ghosts around and why are her nickers still on?
Now, where the hell didi leave my cape from the batman outfit.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


dung gotta nice ring to it tho :)
Lorry

3 Years Ago

Sounds like you'd expect to hear that from the addams family doorbell 😀
Neville

3 Years Ago


I think they had a pull me thingy... that was not a request by the way folks :)
Home truths painted In delicious Black and white. Sounds fantastic when served with tea. Digestion should be quick when things are so clean cut and concisely put. It all looks very final to me and as it should be when there’s so much congestion around. Loved this great poem on past ghosts sir.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


It is fair to say some of them still haunt me my friend, but where would we be without them... read more
Even after knowing her baggage, you are still willing to give her a shoulder to lean on, " whatever else you do keep my number." You have a great heart, my dear poet.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

he does try.. and he has been told many times how trying he can be.... thank you M and true... N
Mrudula Rani

5 Years Ago

It's entirely my pleasure, N.
strong one dear Neville, if there is no room for You among her "others" or even among her memories, then You absolutely deserve better, You were kind enough to for her everything and make her start thinking.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

thank you kindly my friend.. N:)
i have been to bed with this...a woman with ghosts of the past, ones she just couldn't get past...therefore, we couldn't get past that either. So hard to go to bed with the past.
sad.
j.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

which is precisely why we need a clean sheet my friend...thank you again for considering my scribble.. read more
Ghosta need to be laid to rest but not in your bed Neville !

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

I could not agree more Stella Armour.. how's that for poetry eh.. bless ya my friend...... N
Sounds like an ultimatum to me. The ghosts need to go. Those home truths, no grey areas, it's all in black and white and yet, you graciously make the tea and make sure she's got your number. That means the door remains open. What we do for love eh Neville?Much to contemplate between the lines. The ghosts have to be former lovers I reckon.

Chris


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Years Ago

Bless ya Chris there's a lot of residual in and around St......d Rd Northants N

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