Moments #2

Moments #2

 

Tho they cared enough

To share moments

Those moments

Were rarely enough

 

The sharing of moments

Forgiving for taking

For living and breaking

Forever forsaking

 

Those moments

Were rarely

Not never nor nearly

Enough for the making

 

The sharing of moments

Foretold and for telling

Forlorn and forbidden

Foreplay and forgotten

 

They could bend and could

Shake em they could stretch

And could break em but those

Moments they were never enough

 

 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes i would like a redo of certain moments in certain relationships...
but do-overs don't happen...so all that is left is to stretch the memories as far as they can go...and bend them to our will.
and then remember the good parts, and try to smile for a "moment."
j.

[Neville]

welcome to my world jacob.. maybe we should form a cult or summat and burn green candles and stuff.. but then I have tried everything, and it just dont work.... the odd smile tho goes a long way these days... and I do mean odd.. thanks for such a reasoned review j. much appreciated and true N.:)

[Mrudula Rani]

Moments are never enough my friend, the sum of all moments is what makes the relationship worthwhile! Your wonderful words hold so much wisdom, dear N.

[Neville]

you are always far too kind to me M.. but I do like it ...thank you ever so....... N :)

[Mrudula Rani]

You are most welcome my friend.

[Neville]

.......... :)

[Chris Shaw]

Looking back to how things used to be, those special moments and wishing they were still like that. Relationships eh? That's where you took me Neville. Might not have been where you were but that's where your words took me.

Chris

[Neville]

Must have been a moment of something our Chris... maybe I was momentarily lost or sumfink cheers my friend :)

[Chris Shaw]

Daydreaming with da vino :)

[Neville]

the grape & the grain were too numerous...... maybe... :)

[Chris Shaw]

Mixing the grape and the grain is asking for trouble :)

[Neville]

indeed it is... :)