Is It?

Is It?

A Poem by Melbell19

 

Is it wrong for me to still want you?
Is it right for me to hate you for what you have put me through?
Is it as hard for you as it is for me?
Do you stay up at night thinking of me?
Can you sleep with out dreaming of me?
Do you wish she was like me?
Is it wrong for me to wish she would go away?
Is it wrong for me to still love you?

© 2010 Melbell19


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Melbell19
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who do you still love? jw, it's cool :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


It has a definite pang of saddness, like a 'why me?' feel. I loved the way it was short, sweet but as sad as death. Love was entwined in every sentence, and the stangle feeling I got from this was probably the tears choking as I thought about the story behind it. Excellent work, well done and maybe a part two?

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on September 5, 2009
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Melbell19
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I am 20. I am a really horrible speller, and if it weren't for spell check I wouldn't be able to write. I never thought I could write poetry that people actually like, so thanks for the amazing review.. more..

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