Daydreaming

Open...Freedom...

We layed in bed last nite

and I shared things I'd never dream to tell

and now my mind runs in 500 directions

because I know not the way you feel

and yes, its true you've shared with me

what you see in your future but

lately life hasn't been working in my favor

and I can't help but wonder if

this is; you are

another one of those things I care so much about

and will be forced to let go of.

 

I love you, as I've said so many times before

but now it comes with a heavier weight

and it means so much more...

 

And being close to you

just isn't the same.

Somehow I feel like letting you in

has hurt me more than its helped..

I'm not focused anymore

and I can't help but think about you

every minute of everyday..

 

I just thought that you should know

that it feels like I'm daydreaming

and I can't stop thinking of you.....

Reviews

[Jay W Valentine]

The calm before the storm. You can feel the trouble brewing and before you know it you're right. Something so beautiful becomes something so ugly later on. The daydreams are beautiful and blissful though it sucks to not be able to think of the daydreams in a positive way when it's all said and done. Cherish the moments while they are there.

[Bubo]

So romantic and yet holds sorrow that the fear of knowledge a loved one has could hurt you more, because
you love them so.........and I KNOW how you feel, you do feel distracted, walking around dazed, all
those thoughts going around in your head..........wondering when and if they are going to hurt you.
Beautifully written.

[Dave Lounsbury]

That was pretty good. I'm not a big poem reader but it flowed well. Good read!